If your ideas die, I'll just whack you with a stick again. :P Man, you told me this was long and awesome, but.... This far exceeds anything I could have believed. For one, your sentence structure is magnificent. I love your narrative voice. Characterization was well thought out too. That "female scream" thing was a riot, I will admit.
I know you've been having a touch time with this chapter and all, but I still feel bad for Rudy.... Oh well, I'll get over it. After all, he'll die soon. >D Any who, brilliant chapter with (as usual) simply amazing emotion. Keep up the fantastic work. ^^ I'm quite interested with how you're going to put this to a close.
Author's Response: Thanks friend. I never said it was awesome, I said it was long. But thankz anyways. Your comment is approved! :D
Wow. Interesting turn of events. Was not expecting Knuckles to shoot himself. Haha- Silver screams like a girl! Good chapter. Some mistakes but I'm glad that you updated, Thank you!
Author's Response: Like Brad Delson said, "It's comments like that which let us continue on our work." or something like that he said... Anyway, Thanks for the comment! *puts a stamp on it* Your comment is approved! :D
Yesh you do. *bricked* No, not really. But Rudolph's gonna die! *cries* NO! It's not true! It can't be! *grabs Tachar* May he live in our hearts and minds if he dies. ;_; *sniff* Any who, you could have improved on this with descriptions. Save for that, this is okay. ^^ Good job.
Author's Response: Told you. I was nearly falling asleep writing this. I've worked my damn ass off and soon as I posted this, I collapsed on my keyboard. So, YES! HE DIES!! AND ONE MORE PERSON DOES TOO!!!
Takashi is very happy. And I love Rudolph so much. ^^ *holds up little flag* And the line “….. I got jumped by a bunch of people, find out my cellmate’s a homo, and I’m starving, or ‘gra-gra’ as my stomach could says it, I guess that’s all.” is great. "gra-gra". XD And I like details on a sandwich. Any who, this was awesome. I love the end of teh chapter. Great work. ^^
Author's Response: the gra-gra wasn't so hard since I got hungry writing that part. and good 2 know u like Rudy. :D I actually tried to use a visual desription on the sandwich part. and.. I went to get a sandwich myself with the grumbling afterall. XD
Poor Knux. Any who, “But you better watch you’re back cause I know I got mine.” is a great line. I dunno how you create these powerful words, but they're great. ^^ The ending was pretty good as well. Nice job. Keep it up.
Author's Response: i don't know either. An idea comes and I write it down. ITS SO WEIRD! XD I just wish i was a good of a song writer as I am a fanfiction writer.
yeah -.- how many days has it been? 5 right X_X
Author's Response: no..its been .. 7? OMG I GOTTA GO!:X
yosh! I love this FINISH NOW! (takes anger pills) take your time >_
Author's Response: Promise myself to finish this entire story by my b-day.
'But it was not very painful, it just hurt him by memorial disgrace.' I like that line very much. I hope Knux finds out, SEGA's making him such a moron when he really isn't. *shrugs* Though it's yer choice. Can't wait to see what happens next. This is great. ^^
Author's Response: exactly.. and thankyou
WOOOO!!!! I hope Knuckles finds out...then he can help Sonic
Author's Response: yeah... if the plot was different, then he would.. XD
:D The story continues! Oh, wait, it's gonna end? *flails arms* End?! Well, not all that is gold can last, I guess. *sighs* Any who, great job as usual, my bud. ^^ I like how Rudy knew Sonic. That was sort of funny. Or maybe it was the irony that made me laugh. I don't know. But it was still sort of funny. XD
Author's Response: thankyou. *stamped* APPROVED!
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