OMGOMGOMG!!!! ten days......makes me think of the ring lol

Author's Response: haha! yes! *STAMPED* APPROVED!

Can Sonic even pay $400,000? Woah. And no, you haven't lost yer talent, this is still good, despite the fact that Scourge died. ;_; Poor kid. But it worked with the story, and flowed. I like how Sonic isn't mystically innocent. This chapter is okay. Keep it up.

Oh, and before I forget, when a character or narrator quotes someone else's words, it's sort of like ...he was 'a decedent of the devil himself' or any other ridiculous things. Ya should fix that part. ^^

Author's Response: okay. *feels bad for the 1st errr in over a long period* mistakes happen so imma go fix it. (if i can think up something)

Author's Response: $400,000? no. He cannot pay that much. XD which is AWESOME 4 ME! :DDD

wowza, i've been meaning to review this story for a long time, but yeah, i'm busy.

i've never seen Damages, but I think this story's pretty good. I love the descriptions of the blood...i'm a bit of a blood freak. but yeah, that's one of many reasons why i'm still reading this. as far as the NC-17 thing...i don't know. I don't think so, just -R- with like heavy warnings on certain aspects of the story :)

NIce story. I Like the part that talks about Sonic's dream.

totally luv this, good job =]

Author's Response: uh.. thanks.