ugh.. I think school sonadow's are a little over-rated now.. seriously it's like getting old hearing them being done repeatedly..

I'm not dissing your storyline but.. it's the topic I dispise.

Also you could of written it a LITTLE longer.. it's too short... some people on this site take at least a week to write a chapter... if you can't complete one in one day then don't.. save it and continue another day.

and for the italics thing type this:
< i > text here < / i > (dont have spaces between the code)

I like your style of writing, it's great and I guess the story sounds okay far. But sadly I have a feeling (unless some Comet is ging to hit the school sometime) this fic will be like every other highschool story. AKA: angst, cry, comfort, kiss.

And I have a feeling Mephiles is going to be like Silver in your last story. Like.. going on about 'I'm doing this fst' 'I'm going to meet him' 'I'm going to have him' and then in the end he isn't... its what i call typical.. but I guess all stories have thos moments.. and it's my opinion which you don'thave to listen to.

Sorry to point that out, but hey, don't let it get you down..

Good luck on your next chapter.

Author's Response: It's this kind of review that encourages me to do better with my stories. This story is also practice for my other stories that have a more complicated plot.