Your story is confusing me, reader get too little information of the story plot situation. It's hard to understand your unknowns. It's like "The never ending story" that becomes more and more hollow until you put random comments in them that got no sense to the story.
Author's Response: no one says u have to read it k? i try hard on these things and if u dont like it then..... i dont care. you could at last say it doesnt sound good and its confusing. I understand, but to mock my work as a roll of paper or a hollow book, im sorry.but I like the way i write and i may make improvements. but it isnt becuz u think its horrible. i'll do it cuz i want to.
I understood what he said. *blinks* A hidden message, though? Without the proper data to help one crack it, this seems almost inconceivable. I see that he asks Sonic if he understood so that's enough evidence that that's the main message. *pauses* Jeez, I hate codes. Here's my guess: 'Are you still containing an element used in the natural status of my being?' He's made out of Chaos Emeralds, or something, so.... Er.... *scratches head* O_o Nice chapter, by the way. The robots seem a little bit rushed, but you saved yourself using the descriptions and ending. ^^ Great job, as always.
Author's Response: well ya, the robot scene was rather just a quick thought. I'm not a good filler up anyways. But thanks. The code is meant to be hidden and no, it has NOTHING to do with chaos emeralds.
What the hell?!*Ish confused by Hello's way of speaking.*
Author's Response: HAHAHA!!! Hello is suppose to talk weird.
see i offically hate amy now. my hate for her was at an ''ok'', but now its to ''i hate her insanely.''
Author's Response: LMAO
i like it, good job =]
Author's Response: thankyou.
“You don’t even know him that well!” “Neither do you!” Brilliant. That part has a lot of emotion.You left me hanging at the end, too. Overall grade for ya is a 96%. ^^ Excellent work, and please continue. Though I wonder what happened to Hello. Hm.... I shall investigate...ate...uh. YEAH! XD
Author's Response: WHY THANKYOU! :D ur gonna see why he left very soon.
yosh! I reviewed I love this story
Author's Response: hankyou 4 thy review! :D these are my tips so i can go on.
I didn't notice this. *apologizes over and over* Any who, excellent, and Sonic seemed in character. This is a way past cool story. Hope ya continue. ^^
Author's Response: ????????? in character? ... okay. Wel thnks. and it will go on (even though theres like only 4 chapters let)
Me likey! Please continue!
Author's Response: See, it's comments like these that make my day. :D *stamped* approved!
AMY, YOU RACIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >< Any who, I like the characterization of Hello. This is a good chap. ^^
Author's Response: why thankyou. :D
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