Words used in paragraphs over and over: pink hedgehog, fox, Shadow, Rouge, Shadow (again), blacked out, et cetera. Try to refrain from repetitiveness. Any who, Sonic actually saying the f-bomb (or B****) is not not going to happen. No way in HELL, HEAVEN, EARTH, MOBIUS, FLICKY ISLAND, OR ANY OTHER PLACE IN ALL OF EXISTENCE AND NON EXISTENCE. ...Even in the ANTI-WORLD, he doesn't swear. O_O Save for all that, this isn't half bad. You've improved (some what). And I see you're using italics now. XD Please continue. ^^

Author's Response: I know, I thought that it would be a good idea to put him swearing but I see I have to work harder on that.