One word: D’oh! Bad timing Tails. Sorry I haven’t commented before. I’m just so extremely lazy. But sins I can’t criticize I start to think that my cheering comments will get annoying after a while. But anyway. You are really good at turning an overly sweet fairytale into a romantic sonadow comic. Last time I almost laughed my own head of when you turned a delicate glass slipper into one of Shadows hoverskates. Uncomplicated but Brilliant! Have you consider doing something similar to another classic fairytale? I think that too would turn out like this. And this is gold! This story is one of those who make me think I can write. (With the same humiliating results every time.) But you can what I can’t and I’m jealous. ^ ^ So please continue and write the fairytales of the next generation! ^ ^
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!^^ And no worries, I'm happy about any reviews I get that tell me people enjoy my writing. :) I'm not sure whether I'll do another fairy tale soon, but I do have another sonadow up by now... Glad this makes you laugh so far, thanks a lot for such a detailed review! :D
The chapter title was the clinger. Especially the whole "Halali!" thing. No suggestions for the story. I love your version of Tails. He's a silly little riot. Sorry, nothing much to say. ^^;
Author's Response: Hey there! Heh, glad you liked it.^^ Tails is wayy too cute for his own good. He causes almost as much mayhem as sonic does in my other fics. ;) Thanks for commenting!
'...ever felt like crying and laughing your head off at the same time?'
lol, yup, this being one of those times XD I LOVED the dance scene, that was awsome =]
Author's Response: WOW, thank you so much for all of those reviews!^^ It was really interesting to read what you liked most. :) I think that means I'll have to update in the next few days...;)
'And Shadow was bathed in Emerald fire'
I love this line, it totally jumpped out from the rest of the story =]
good job on this chap.
lol, I love how Shads, Knuckles, Rouge, and Amy play out.
I like the dress, I can kinda visualize it. you might wanna work in some more details? I just like detail, sorry
Ha! Rouge the Bat, I didn't expect her, but, lol, and wizard Knuckles...nice job XD
this chappie was good, with all the humor an what nots
visual agony.....XD that's great, not for Shads I mean, just the line, sounds good.
Geeze, Sonic like's to run around with no pants. but I like the description with Amy and her purse versus her 40lb dress
ha!!!! the fuckin star fish getting into her dress!!!! that was funny, very intresting visual.
kill the Hero Chao's....aw, I really thought he was gonna do it, then I was like naw!
but i'm glad they finally met, this should be intresting :)
aw, closing chunk is sad, poor Shadow.
I like how Shadow's a total smart ass but he's still got that 'Cinderella' thing....and Cinderello.....XDD?!?!?!?!? fuckin' halarious!
Once again, your work makes me exceedingly happy; I'm giggling like an idiot right now, and my roommate probably thinks I'm off my rocker. Seriously, though, you've maintained a great balance of romance, humor, and traditional storyline. Keep it up!
Also, the hoverskate idea is made of concentrated win. =D
Author's Response: (huge grin) Thanks! XD I admit the hoverskate thing was something I wanted to put in there from the very beginning. It's just so absurd it was begging to be written. Hope you like the new chappie too and thanks a lot for the nice review! :D
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