After six entire chapters.... Shadow makes it. No suggestions. I like the puns and, of course, Tails. That was sort of funny. I don't have much to say, I'm afraid. Keep up the good work. This story is quite a laugh. ^^
Author's Response: Yeah, talk about trouble getting started, huh? Well, my fics do tend to be somewhat long-winded...which I use as an excuse to shove in three jokes per paragraph, usually. ;) This chappie tho is actual romance, so hope you like! Thanks for the comment!
Finally he gets there! This chapter was really good. I haven't stopped laughing yet. I laughed so hard that juice came out my nose when Amy found them under the table! haha. Poor Shadow doesn't know that he can fall in love. Aww! Oh well. That can only make it more interesting right? Thanks for updating!!
Author's Response: Hey there! Well, Shadow's gonna find out about that soon, I promise - and no worries, the next update is here. Thank you for reviewing! :D
Fantastic chapter! , you really outdid yourself, i hope shadow gets out of that dress, poor shadow
Author's Response: Well, that's still up to speculation - but even if I'm known for killing of Tails rather regularily, I don't really torture my characters that much, so let's wait and see, huh?^^
9.9/10
Author's Response: (takes a bow) Why thank you! Now, what could be missing for this elusive decimal point...?
Oh, goodness... This is amazing. You've done an absolutely stellar job of taking the traditional story, setting it in the Sonic-verse, and STILL staying true to the characters' personalities. Also, the delicious little bits of satire you mix into your writing fill my heart with girlish, English-major glee. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D Next chappie is up - I'm glad you think they are IC, that's hardest in sonadow fics.^^ hope you continue to like the story! :)
Very nicely done, althou, LOL shadow is getting cross dressed, and Sonic under the table. and why didn't you do the glass slipper??? i've would of laugh my ass off. anyway please continue soon, i can't wait to read when sonic and shadow meets at the ball, and ewwww mushy ponytail for the star-fish to eat...lol
Author's Response: There is a reason why I didn't do the glass slipper, but it will become apparent only later. ;) (besides, I'm not sure whether Shadow would appreciate it much...XD) Eyeleens diet is...interesting to say the least. Now on to the meeting, thx for reviewing!
Your Sonic in this story is probably one of my favorite ever. I love the way he makes subtle hints at his private/taboo thoughts. Hints that no one would get make allow him somewhat of an internal chuckle. I do that myself so it is kinda neat seeing it in writing.
Your Shadow is also quite good but I think the big surprise here is how great your Knuckles is. A lot of people describe Knuckles in a lot of different ways. He is a difficult character to nail but I think you have given him the appropriate personality.
Author's Response: Glad you like! :D I try to keep my Sonic the same in all my fics, so I got some practice writing him like this.^^ Knuckles is my third fav character, so I do like him as well - over at ffnet I read some really Knux fics, so always try to portray him as a cool guy.^^ Glad you like and thx a lot for the detailed review!
Oh my, I should not read your updates at work. I swear everyone that’s walked past has asked me what’s so funny, and ‘Err… I am just remembering a joke my friend told me’ doesn’t work that well when you don’t know any jokes!
Anyway to get back on topic, I adored the chapter, Shadow cross-dressing, Mascara, Cream devastated by the ‘I can’t love thing’, and of course the threat of rabid fan girls XD. You have a talent for humour, and Sonic hiding under the table is so fricken cute! I am looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Heheheh, I know that situation (and I do know some jokes, but they're not that funny...XD) ^^ Sonic under the table was fun to write. He should do that more often.^^ Next chapter is here - and the chaos is just about to begin...thx a lot for commenting!
Omigosh. Great. That was simply hilarious, especially the part about the sonadow fangirls and Knuckles cringing in horror. Eyeleen kinda scares me, though.... Any who, your combination of well placed satire and small romance with loads of reference to Cinderella works out perfectly. No suggestions. This is awesome. ^^
Author's Response: Eyeleen IS scary. period. XD Glad you like the satire, cinderella is just too cute a story to pass by. Never enrage the fangirls...and romance should not be that far away now. ;) Thx a lot for reviewing! :D
Shadow in a dress.....PERFECT!!! But yes...I agree with Knux.....guy in heels=no no but good chapter
Author's Response: Nope, no glass slippers for poor Shads. But I think the dress would look quite good on him. ;) Glad you like the story, thx for the comment! :D
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