Well I finally read everything althou there is a yaoi comic of FF7 called "Cinderella Boy"but it has nothng to do witht the story.
Kudos on the very original Idea, now the see who will be the fairy godmother of the story if there is gonna be one.
Author's Response: Sure there'll be fairy godmothers! (Just look at the title of the new chappie ;)) And I can tell you you'll be surprised...XD Thanks for reviewing!
;D I'm actually really liking this, I hope you upload the next chapter soon! yeah sorry for the lack of criticism ~ it's not that I'm a writer myself, just a reader.
Author's Response: No worries, I'm happy about any and all reviews, if a person is enjoying my story and tells me that, I get this warm, fuzzy feeling.^^ Next chapter is here, and the fourth shouldn't be that far away - thanks for the nice comment! :)
Interesting. I love this parody and Sonic being gay. XD No suggestions, really. Good to know Rosie has a mild part. Haven't seen her in many fanfics. ^^
Author's Response: yeah, it's a pity, no? I do love having insane amounts of cameos in my AU fanfics, though - be prepared for quite a few of familiar faces when the ball finally starts! ;) Thanks for the review! :)
Ooooo getting interesting....definatly getting good. I hope to see more soon.
Author's Response: thanks! More is about to come, and chapter four should actually be out even faster, if the feedback's good!^^
Meh.... I like the idea in general...
but royalty being openly gay seems rather....MEH.
It is good style wise, but I deduct a point for constant satirical note on the story Cinderella (you might earn back if you were intending the satire).
Author's Response: Yup, satire full and completely intended.^^ As for royalty being openly gay...well, I never said that, did I? ;) You´ll have to read to find out... Still, the interesting thing is that there is actually something like this...a story book called 'Prince & Prince' for UK primary schools, teaching everyone that shounen-ai is a-okay! XD
awww I like this....Cinderella was one of my fave movies as a kid
Author's Response: thanks! Yup, gotta love fairy tales...:)
Hahahaha three times a day! I love this it's wicked!
Author's Response: ^^ Black doom strikes me as teh guy who´d say that. ;)
CINDERELLA?! Well, it's original (sort of). A little too much narrative explanatory for my liking, but oh well.
Interesting step-sister, though.... *muses* Eyeleen. Heh. HUMOR! XD You've done an okay job, so far. ^^ 4/5 Keep it up.
Author's Response: hmm, okay, I´ll try to break the narrative up with dialogue more often...puns is what makes the world go around. ;)
I like it! I know it is silly to claim an adaptation as "original" but the term certainly applies here.
So far it seems to be well paced and has a nice balance of dialogue and description.
PS: I would personally like to congratulate you on making the evil step-sister someone other then Amy. While I like her, I realize that many on this site do not but, it wouldn't have made sense to have her as Black Doom's daughter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed comment! :) Yeah, there´s scarcely a character in the sonicverse i hate...( exception: Big. oh, and CHRIS! >.<) so no amy-bashing for this fic. besides, that eye-thingy is so much more fun...^^
wow i love how you made Cinderella into sonadow it totally fits good job =]
Author's Response: thanks! :)
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