GAH!! That was not fair! I was expecting a longer chapter! DX
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Alright, now that I'm through ranting. ^^ Loved this chapter, even if it wasn't as long as I had expected it to be. And I'm glad Sonic's finally come back! Whoo! I praise your wonderful writing. And I beg you to continue. *gets down on knees* See? Now I'm begging. X3
Author's Response: Have no fear, I have a plan for some more suspense involving Sonic and some actual sonadow to take place where we have our new issue of the whole "hatred" against Shadow for taking our favorite blue hedgie's life away! What a long sentence. Woot. I thank you and praise the ground you walk upon for your wonderful feedback. :D
I was wondering when you'd update again...not that I'm getting on your case about it, far be it from someone like me.
Is this my first review on here? O.o Gee, I'm such a bad person for not sending one sooner.
Anyway, this was brilliant. I'm amazed at how you can pull off another view in how these characters react to these situations. I don't see that often. I mean most people write how Sonic would throw away all cares in the world just to have Shadow's baby. I confess, me included. But you! Well, congrats to you.
I know I may be sucking up, and I'm sorry. But I just wanted to let you know great work and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Your review sends spastic glee to me. I was expecting a pack of angry dogs on me about this chapter. Glad to know you tolerate, not to mention congratulate me on my different point of view. Truthfully, I'd love to see them have "happily ever after..." too, but as you probably know, I'm trying a realistic approach. Thank you for this review. Totally has made my day. Once again, spastic glee. Weird smiles will be written across my face as I dance around in the street, mystically avoiding swerving cars. XD
I was wondering when you'd update again...not that I'm getting on your case about it, far be it from someone like me.
Is this my first review on here? O.o Gee, I'm such a bad person for not sending one sooner.
Anyway, this was brilliant.
sonilver?Well not so much i guess.I think silver is kind of trapped,but Sonic looks ok.
You really caught Silver's thought right!!!That's a real Silver!=v=
I'm missing Shadow now...you hide him,yet he's still everywhere in those hedgehogs' heads.You made him misterious and cool~!!!
Happy birthday~~~=v=
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry. Shadow's in the next chapter. (I'm already halfway through the chapter! :O) Thanks for letting me know if I kept my version of Silver in character. Yes, I believe he does feel trapped. Between a rock and a pointy, hard place of certain doom. As for my birthday and Christmas present, thank you~! And thanks for the review in general. Man, do I love my reviewers. You guys rock! :D
I'm pretty sure that I told you the last time I liked Sonic/Shadow, but I have to say, throwing Silver into it made it nice. Shadow is being a complete a-hole while Silver is pretty much being his opposite; Silver seems more gentle than the other. :P It's interesting how Sonic has to keep telling himself he loves Shadow, like to reassure himself. And I also found it interesting when Sonic felt uncomfortable by what Shadow was doing to him in the last chapter. I don't know, it's your call, I guess you have to follow someone else on what couple they like, because I'd like to see either one. I do have to say I'd like to see one of the couples progress more in the next couple of chapters, and the whole pregnancy issue. I really hope you update soon. :3
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad that you like the triangle. Of course, I'm not going to bring in a lemon, but the pregnancy is coming up. ...Very, very soon, shall we say? As for making one couple progress, I've been thinking about making the sonilver slightly more prominent to add to the general distress everyone in the story is in. >:3 Once you get the fire started, it's fairly easy to find ways to burn it brighter, as you know. Any who, this review is extremely helpful. (You gave me courage to face a crowd of angry sonadow fans! :O) Thank you for the review. ^^
I've got a gift for you,Takashi~~~here!
http://ade-queen.deviantart.com/art/My-Shadow-96387557
Author's Response: Holy schnitzel! That is wicked cool! I'm totally making this my new desktop. You rock! Thank you so much for the picture. You have no idea how happy this makes me. ^^
Wow!!!UPdate!!!(flying around cheerfully)
I love this chapter~especially the "sonadow-ness"~! It's like their position has changed,now Shadow is a little unable to hide his true feelings...WOW!
By the way,i haven't imagine that Amy would be so brave to call Shads "a thing" for the 2rd time...|||She's brave,and let her die.=v=
COme on Come on Come on! Update! i wish the big mistery will reveal itself soon~
Author's Response: Yesh! A review! :D I've already started the next chapter and some key points may be introduced. I just have to see how well I can execute them in the current situation. As for Amy being brave, I find that she is very adamant when confronted with danger for "her" Sonic. She tends to act brash when angry, so it wasn't quite bravery, just thoughtless rage...which we both know she knew regrets. XD Who knows? Maybe pinky may be confronted with a...misfortune. *cue evil laughter* Thanks for reviewing. ^^
That is absolutely wonderful!!!
I'm a Chinese girl,a sonadow fan finding no story in my own language,and turned to this place just to find storys like yours!!!
You really give Shadow and Sonic distinguished charactor,whick i love so much! I'm so crazy about the Shadow saying "i love you"with a stone-cold face...And the Sonic with lovely jokes like "happy mother's day"...lol
It's just so wonderful!!!
By the way,i am the moderator of a Sonadow-BBS in China,and i'd greatly appreciate it if i would be permitted to translate your splendid works into Chinese!!! I just want more people to read this wonderful story!!!PLEASE!!!
Correct me for grammar mistaks...i'd be thankful just like poor Sonic!:)
Author's Response: Of course you can translate it into Chinese! Man, am I flattered. As long as you give credit, I'll be happy to allow to you. Good to know you like the story and my characterization. ^^ Your English grammar isn't the best, but it's better than most foreigners, XD I'm afraid, since you asked. I'll show you your review in proper English: This is absolutely wonderful! I'm a Chinese girl and a sonadow fan and I can't find any stories in my own language, so I turned to this place to find stories like yours. You really five Shadow and Sonic distinguished characters, which I love so much! I'm so crazy about Shadow saying, "I love you" with a stone-cold face. And Sonic with lovely jokes like "Happy Mother's Day". Lol. It's just so wonderful! By the way, I am the moderator of a Sonadow-BBS in China, and I'd greatly appreciate it if I would be permitted to translate your splendid works into Chinese! I just want more people to read this wonderful story! PLEASE! Correct me for grammar mistakes. You know what, you make me so happy, I'm going to update today. ^^ This is one of the nicest reviews ever. Thanks for reviewing! Thank you so much! ^^
You complain about not updating look at me I just got back here and started retyping my chappie if you must know I have been playing Mother3/Earthbound 2 blast my laziness anyway your Story and Chapter are just excellent :D so I guess I'll have to get my Lazy ass up and type eh >XD --------and sorry I reviewed wrong chappie dum dum Wizzie Dum dum
Author's Response: Thanks for your enthusiasm as always, wizardmaren, and thanks for liking the chapter. ^^ And you're right, you'd better get off your lazy ass, mister! I've been wondering if you went to the Bermuda Triangle or somethin'. And thanks for reviewing. ^^
You complain about not updating look at me I just got back here and started retyping my chappie if you must know I have been playing Mother3/Earthbound 2 blast my laziness anyway your Story and Chapter are just excellent :D so I guess I'll have to get my Lazy ass up and type eh >XD
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