it took awhile but great chapter i think silver shoude be in the love triangle
Author's Response: Silver again, eh? That's two. And yes, it took a while. Bothered me that it took so long, but I wanted to make it slightly better than usually...and the dialogue just wasn't running smoothly. ^^; Thanks for reviewing.
I say either Mephi or Silv cuz those are the only ones I like
Author's Response: In a love triangle with Sonic and Shad? Okay, Mephiles or Silver is has one so far. Anybody else?
lol
Author's Response: ...Don't review my stuff again. If you do, I will be flat right out rude. You will not want to see a pissed off Takashi. Stop disrespecting yourself with these reviews. Leave me be with your "reviews". Mauvaise, "reviewer". Mauviase. Très mauvias. *shakes head* I don't want these things cluttering up my stories. If you like my story, comment on it in legible writing, in which I mean: Write about the story more than "lol" and "omg". Comprendre?
wow.
Author's Response: About what?
omg that was cool i like that.
Author's Response: I suppose that's good. By the way, you capitalize "I"s.
omg this is so wrong not the sonadow but something els ei cant put my finger on it.
Author's Response: .....Really, now?
omg shadow is so abusive. ...
Author's Response: Of course he is, but please, I would respect you more if you stopped using "omg" and "lol" every comment.
omg lol that last part was funny yet sad.
Author's Response: Proper grammar is respected on this site, and especially around me. But it's good to know that I set a mood.
hah shadow u meany.
Author's Response: Nice to hear yer thoughts, but what'cha think of the story in general?
O jeez! My English is not the best but I’ll try ^ ^. “Twelve year older!" shouldn’t it be “twelve years old”, “He wanted to awkward moment” – He wanted “the” or “this” awkward moment”, "Funny. I thought all that living things needed food, water, and a habitat."- living things needed was food, water, and a habitat." Please, correct me if I’M wrong. ^ ^’ My grammar could be better and my knowledge about “figure of speech” and such thing doesn’t even exist.
P.S I forgot to tell you that I really liked this one:
"But it was too late. The bird was already dead. The End. Moral: Everlasting happiness is a joke."
-Rule of Rose, The Bird of Happiness
It’s always fun to read these phrases you put in the beginning of each chapter. I even wrote this one down. ^ ^
Author's Response: Man, I'm so sorry. I did rush this one. Argh. Only one of the incomplete phrases you put up is a complete sentence is "twelve year older". That is an English phrase. Thanks for correcting the rest. ^^; That's what happens when I try to complete a chapter real fast so people don't harass me anymore. And glad to know you like the quote from Rule of Rose, I do too. It was from the one of the story books Jennifer reads in the game. Pretty creepy, if you ask me. It had pictures and everything. O_o Thanks for the extreme help and reviewing...again! <3
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