Aloha ^ ^‘. Sorry I haven’t reviewed in a while. I’m so lazy. I guess you don’t have any head (or mind) left after this chapter. This was so romantic that I just got one question: Who are you and what have you done with the Takashi we all love and fear. ^ ^ OK, back to the story. I really loved this line: "What about the pink one? Can't we just ditch her...or were you planning on feeding her to my father? If so, fantastic idea, faker." It’s wonderful ^ ^. Not to mention when Super tricked Sonic. Hilarious! By the way, you can’t put Silver in a better light. Insanity fits him perfectly. There’s just some words missing now and then (I think O.O) but other then that there is nothing to complain about. You can not improve what’s already perfect. So WHAT do you need me for? ^ ^ Smiles
Author's Response: I know. O_O Blame the soda I drank. But no worries, I'm retrieving my mind piece by piece. Good to know that you liked the dialogue and "romance". XD And it's very great to know that you too like psycho Silver. Mind telling me the words I missed, though? Thanks for reviewing, SapphireStardust. ^^
yaaay thanks for updateing i was getting worred that you wouldnt update it thank you poor knuckles but silver didnt seem too insane....yet
Author's Response: Worried? Heh, no worries. I have a tendency to be slow is all. XD And Silv...well, you'll see what's wrong with him. *grins* Thanks for reviewing.
I love this chapter, so much and for reasons that aren't immediately obvious.
Firstly is Super's actions in this chapter. I don't know if you intended it like this but Super's trick on Sonic was the first time we have seen him do something intentionally harmful to Sonic. The discussion from last chapter sounded like Super trying to wake Sonic up to a possible truth but, this small deception throws his intentions to the wind. Now, I don't know if Shadow is using Sonic as Super so convincingly proposed last chapter OR if Super is just trying to mess with Sonic. Good stuff there.
Also, I love your Silver. The game, and many fics, paint him as an immature child but not you. Love it. And yes, Daisuke Ono's Silver is amazing. One of the best voices in the canon. Completely changes the character from what we got in the USA.
Author's Response: Oh, good you picked up on that. I'm very glad that you did. Super might not be as truthful as we all have thought. Perhaps we all shall find out later. ^^ And about Silver being mature: I'm sort of sick of him being super, super naive to the point of being just plain old stupid. Naivety and stupidity are two separate things. Glad you like my version and Daisuke Ono. XD Thanks for reviewing, Sonic Spartan. Man, all these reviews are fantastic. ^^
Amber locked with ruby for a moment. They're feelings were mutual.
It's their, not they're.
Author's Response: My apologies. I must have made a typo. ^^; Thanks for picking up on that. I'll go back and fix it. Thank you! ^^
yay insanity is fun! I know I'm insane....kinda....not enough to go to a happy house though.....anyways I love this story and you definatly have to continue it.
Author's Response: Happy houses are fuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnn~! :3 Thanks for reviewing.
Forgive me for not reviewing the last chapter, kind of flew over my head. :P But no, I did not forget this story, thus why I'm reviewing now.
Shadow has some serious anger issues, but I guess that's the only way to express himself. Anger and love are both extremely passionate...maybe that's why he switches between the two so easily. Or he's just fucked up in the head. :3 I think Shadow does love Sonic...he's just emotionally screwed up.
As for Sonic, a lot of second thoughts. And Super certainly isn't helping him.
Hell, I'm just guessing, you're the one who knows. You're the author. :P Can't wait for the next chapter, still completely sucked into this story.
Author's Response: Yeah, Shadow's got some issues. XD And you're right, a demon in Sonic's head isn't helpin' him. Thanks for reviewing as always. ^^
hey takashi it's me mister lazy who's on writer's block U_U anyway this is getting pretty good and I really like the way you write one question though in the italics who's speaking cause that kinda had me confused at first LOL but um yeah please continue this it's really good in the mean time I will be starting another story soon so I will be doing something and so when I don't have an idea for one story I will for the other k so please look that one up when it comes to be k thanks and good luck with your story and I hope you get more reviews soon more than mine that's for sure >_
Author's Response: What can I say? I'm grossly popular here. ^^; The questions through italics, as you know, come from Super in Sonic's head. Glad to know the italics help distinguish the speaker. Good luck with yer new story, too. ^^ Thanks for reviewing as always.
i like this story keep writeing. When will the next chapter be finished?
Author's Response: I really don't know. Depends when I have enough time to jot down ideas and then type 'em up. Hopefully within four or five weeks seeing how stuck I am. And thanks for reviewing, though I'd like some critique. ^^;
Interesting story I will admit and confusing all at once for I didn't recall Knuckles and Silver getting into such a predicament I felt like I had another ADD moment for two seconds and had to read it again. Any who, the story is interesting. Keep at it :)
Author's Response: I never put it in the narrative because it was focusing on Sonic and Shads. ^^; Sorry if I confused ya. Any who, thanks for reviewing. ^^
hi it's me um just wanted to say that this is turning out really nice
and tell shadowluz to update Damages k thanks
Author's Response: I will when she replies to my emails. Oh, and can you finish that Tortured Out of Love thing? Emerald's annoying me and I want her to leave me in peace. Thanks, bud. And thanks for reviewing. 30 reviews! WOO! XD
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