hey there =D
i've been meaning to write a review but I haven't had the opportunity x]
um, I like the story as a whole, some chappies I get confused as to what's going on, who's talking and such and such. It doesn't make the story unlikeable or anything so it's cool =]
anything that confused me I had to read it over like 5 times x] also I like the French chappie titles. um....what else...xp ah, looking forward to more stories and this one being updated, i'll try reviewing each chap =]
~Raven
Author's Response: Yay! A new reviewer! ^^ I'll try not to confuzzle you too much anymore for here on out. ^^; Thanks for reviewing.
Well, that makes sense. That Shadow is using is using Sonic to have kids because he wants him to die; males body definitely can't handle child birth. o_O; Maybe Shadow does love him...maybe not. Can't wait to read more. x3
Author's Response: Good to know I've actually made sense. ^^; Thanks for reviewing. ^^
-Catches candy- =D
Another good chapter. God, Shadow swings from one emotion to the next. I'm guessing Sonic got the operation? I hope we find out soon how that goes. So I swear, PEOPLE BETTER REVIEW!
Update ASAP.
Happy Holidays. x)
Author's Response: I'm tryin' to update. And yes, Shadow switches emotions like crazy. I swear he has bipolar disorder. XD Happy holidays and thanks for reviewing! ^^
hooray for you this is awesome and tell emerald i'll send her a private copy of my silverxmephiles stroy if she WILL NOT STOP BOTHERING YOU or ie when you said I would not leave you alone hence the other story
Author's Response: Yeah. She needs that. ^^; I swear, she's driving me up a wall. I'm positive she'll be squeeing if you do. Thanks for that and reviewing, wizardmaren. ^^ You've help me tons.
Holy snap, that was awesome. MORE PLZ.
Author's Response: Oki doki. I'm working on it. ^^ Thanks for reviewing.
Gotta love the tension between the two. You really do a good job of having Shadow jump back and forth between hostile and loving. Only thing that stood out to me...Fluorescent. Just one error is pretty darn good.
Can't wait until next chapter and possibly seeing just what the hell ole Shads did to Sonic.
Author's Response: Oops. I'll go fix that right now. ^^; Any who, thanks. Thanks for reviewing, helping, and reading. You always do, Sonic Spartan. ^^
C'mon, I'm obsessed by your story. Can't wait. By holding your story back is torturing me. It's christmas so plz?
Author's Response: Exactly. I've been very busy--and dizzy. By the way, I almost put the story on hold. I'm sure I'll find the time to write. ^^ Thanks for reviewing. Only one more to go. X3
Author's Response: WHAT THE HELL?! HOLY LIMBURGER CHEESE!!!!! The story didn't upload fully. GOD DAMN IT!!!!!! I think I fixed it. I tried six different times. I hope it worked this time. Apologies. So many. *smacks computer* You said I had uploaded it correctly! ><
Hm. Finally, Sonic is showing -some- back bone. Was Shadow being submissive in this chapter? Nice change, nice change. Sonic should have some more confidence; it's more like him. I can't see Sonic being the one to just take something laying down.
Author's Response: True. I'm working on that. *nods* Thanks for the help. I'll be sure to add more of that. Thanks for reviewing. ^^
I was laughing throughout the whole thing. XD great chapter! oh, ur not alone. I do writing as a hobby, but its now a 'job'.. so that makes 4 jobs for me! don't worry, ur not alone. :D
Author's Response: Good. I dun' wanna be alone. XD And thanks for reviewing as always, bud. I intended for the chapter to be a more comical-like filler, and I see that it worked one someone. YAY! ^^
more!!!!!!
Author's Response: *blinks* You could give some advice or somethin', but okay. *nods* I'm sick anyways, so I'll work on it. Thanks for reviewing. ^^
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