this has to be the most saddest story and twisted minded one I think I've ever read...



AND I TOTALLY LOVED IT!!! @.@
Shit, you must...repeat, MUST do another one, though it was short, WHY DID YOU MAKE IT SHOOOORT! *shakes you*
need more ; 0;

Author's Response: Gaaah!!! *dies* x.x Hmm.. Maybe i'll make another one and hopefully it'll be longer too.

I can help you with insane stories. *maniacal laughter* Any who, wonderful ending! This is an instant fav. The last line was simply full of emotion. You could have described a little more gore, but it's amazing for your first time. ^^

Author's Response: I didn't want to describe the gore.. I dun want to send anyone to the hospital or anything teehee... Then again I couldn't really add any gore since all Shadow did was slash a few times. If he was trying to rip out his heart and stuff it down his throat THEN I would add gore ^^