awww, its so soft and adorable, I truely love how it came out
can't wait to read more~!
Author's Response: ^_^ thanks much!!
Wow....I like this so far...^^ Keep going plz.
Author's Response: thank you so very much ^_^ i guess i will ^_^
More dude I loved your story!!!!
Author's Response: hehe thank you so much ^_^
awww it's cute. Though I know you said at the beginning you have problems with paragraphs but you should try to learn how to make them to break it up a bit because it would look much better.
Author's Response: thxx ^_^ yea i never know where to split them at >.>
Eh...I don't like the beginning. You had an overuse of ellipses and the story was a little too fast for my liking. Work on it, is my suggestion. Wonderful titling, though. ^^
Author's Response: argg i know it's nothing short of crap. its practically plotless cause i'm to uncreative x_x thx i guess ^_^
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