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Reviews For Rain

Name: Shaedow4774 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2007 6:49 PM · For: Chapter 1
awww, its so soft and adorable, I truely love how it came out

can't wait to read more~!

Author's Response: ^_^ thanks much!!


Name: blacksoul (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2007 8:58 AM · For: Chapter 1
Wow....I like this so far...^^ Keep going plz.

Author's Response: thank you so very much ^_^ i guess i will ^_^


Name: Bluehog (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2007 7:16 PM · For: Chapter 1
More dude I loved your story!!!!

Author's Response: hehe thank you so much ^_^


Name: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2007 4:40 PM · For: Chapter 1
awww it's cute. Though I know you said at the beginning you have problems with paragraphs but you should try to learn how to make them to break it up a bit because it would look much better.

Author's Response: thxx ^_^ yea i never know where to split them at >.>


Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2007 3:39 PM · For: Chapter 1
Eh...I don't like the beginning. You had an overuse of ellipses and the story was a little too fast for my liking. Work on it, is my suggestion. Wonderful titling, though. ^^

Author's Response: argg i know it's nothing short of crap. its practically plotless cause i'm to uncreative x_x thx i guess ^_^


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