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20183.20chenjinyan

Are you still working on this? All Sonadows should have a fairytale/lemon ending.

continue please

(You're sick of me, aren't ya?) Your response made no sense seeing as how you used no periods. ;;;; Anyways, I implore you to at least try my advice.
And what I meant about Sonic running is that it is physically impossible for you to obtain the momentum for those speeds by simply starting out fast. When you sprint, you do not start out at sprinting speed; you need to build your momentum. Oh, and trust me, exclamation marks are really bastards in disguise. I've learned the hard way. Here's an example of the lack of exclamation points and the addition of emotion:
Venice slammed the door, his face a blood curling red, washed with fury. He grabbed a magazine and balled it tightly in his left fist. Breath hissed out from his teeth. An eyelid twitched before he grabbed Mia by her jacket, heaving her to the exit. "Get out." His rancid snarl echoed throughout the void of a room.
Whereas a "nice" "screaming" scene would be:
"GET OUT!!!!!!!!" Venice said, furious, slamming the door loudly. He gripped Mia angrily, his yells echoing.
Oh, and if people say you use too many commas, it's probably because you might put them in the wrong places. Check for that.
So, to put it quite bluntly, I'm replying again because I need clarification. One thing I registered was that you do not wish to take my advice. *shrugs* Your loss (or is it...?). I can't make the horse drink water. See ya, good day, an' I hope ya aren't bothered by me responding.
By the way, before I forget, published books use "me and..." as a form of accenting the speech. I could say "Ah don' got no stinkin' suga here." and it would be totally correct. True, I used double negatives, used 'Ah' in place of 'I' and spelled 'sugar' as 'suga'. It's a southern accent. Proper grammar would have been "I don't have any stinking sugar here." I could also say "Me and Susan are going to the mall. We don't have no cameras." and it's correct. Comprehend? I hope so. ^^ I myself have a tendency to say "these ones..." when it's supposed to be "these...", but I refrain from writing "these ones...". You just have to watch out for it. Reread your writing, use a grammar checker, or something. That's my suggestion. Have a nice day. X3

Author's Response: i dont like using periods when im not writing >_>' i use faces instead ^_^. i know i'm only 13 and i need lots of help with my writing i just dont like getting criticized even though i need it, human nature ya know... but in the shows and stuff he does tht, like runs really fast, isnt that how it's suppose to be? my LA teacher always says exclamation point instead of yelling, so i guess i kinda picked up on that or i just like them ^_^... i put them in, like you said, at the smallest of pauses... its only normal to miss a few >_>' i do appreciate it, i just don't like to have it pointed out how horrible my story really is >_> like i said it's only in my nature... haha tht makes no sence... if thts true then why can't i use it? i do use grammar check >_>'