Wow, Im amazed at this, and this is your first story, plus getting prais from Takashi is like getting blessed by the pope himself.
I cant wait for your future stories anyway
Author's Response: Really? I just noticed something the administrator posted about Takashi. Takashi must be a really good writer! *teach me!* Thank you so much for reviewing!
Woah, I've been planning on writing something sort of like this. O_o Any who, this is fantastic for your first story, and incredibly original. You had some nice similes, though I would suggest a little more explanation for the situation. Your first person outlook is great, though. Keep going with this story. ^^ It's awesome.
Author's Response: Aww.... thank you. *blush*
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