Nice extensive vocabulary!
perfect!!!!absolutly perfect!!!
i love how you put it that sonic is a vampire!it's awesome!!!
god my dick is so hard lol.
I am going to keep this simple.
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8/10
Sequel? ABSOLUTELY! This is one of the better written oneshots I have ever seen. You also happen to have used one of my personal favorite styles when it comes to lemons, the obscure shot or "shaky-cam" in films.
Describe what is happening enough for it to be clear but leave a bit up to the reader. I love it!
I'm also amazed you don't have more reviews on this.
This is original. Thank you for writing something that is well done. *claps* You did fantastic. The lemon was very descriptive and your dialogue was great. ^^ No suggestions.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! ^^
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