This is very well written. I love the way you had vampires in here. Keep writing.
I hate cliffhangers, can you please finish this?
xD Size difference between humans and hedgehogs is ACTUALLY put into effect! Niceee.
If the Meadowed area was once a city... wouldn't it just be ruins? I thought buildings destroyed the soils ability to grow anything.
I see you've fallen prey to the Medieval version of a Vampire, eh? I was a little confused at that part of who was who, but I slowly got a hold of it.
"a crossbow bolt piecing its chest". Piercing, I'm guessing? x3
If the drones were coming back with more, wouldn't they want to stay? Because they are going to go back to terrorizing the town.
Overall, I loved it. Good flow, and easy read. Sorry for being so harsh! Don't hold it against me, please!
Sorry again! ~Miles Prower~
That must be some serious writers block, but its seems to be good
cool story cant wait for ya to do the next part
Oops, I meant to give you 8 on the rating, sorry.
Wow, awesome! Yeah, vampire stories always go down well. Boomer's an Archie character, right? That part at the beginning was hilarious.
I noticed you started this in 2007 so I suppose you've let this story go, huh? That's a shame, but I know it can be hard to carry on with something like this. An awesome concept, thumbs up!
PS: I'm sorry if I seemed rude when you reviewed my story. I really need appreciate it.
make part 2!!!!!!! PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPZL!!!!!!!
This is really good!
I'd love to see Sonic as the top dog.. err... Hedgehog.. of the vampires. It's written really great too!
Outstanding!
When will the next come out? It's really good. ^^
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