Um... Wow? That was really interesting. Never really heard of the whole incubus/vampire thing before so it was kinda confusing to me, but it was good anyway. Hope you update again soon!!
O_o That was...intense. Excellent, I'd say as well. Very excellent. Then again, what isn't cool about incubi sex? :P Any who, only one error was spotted: In your third sentence of the chapter, you forgot "he". That's all, though. Great job. I have no suggestions because I can't write this kind of stuff. *sits in a corner being jealous* >_> Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what happens. ^^
i love it. vampires rock ^_^
I'm very interested in your story, I have never really been a great fan of romance vampire stories. But this one grasped my attention for it seemes interesting. Please continue!
WHEEE!!!!! A GO IN BED!!!!! YAY SMEX!!!!!
Author's Response: lol, yep. and it's gonna be nice and descriptive lol
I love how all those incubi have cold auras. XD Glad you mentioned that, though I dun know how Sonic could stand it. Your line: "Section 1 of the coven handbook; the leader reserves the right to be unfair." is simply ingenious as well. All in all, the chapter was simply fantastic. No suggestions. ^^
I like it very much your writing is extremely unique and aluring (genius aside) HA! First one to review takashi XP please continue your story
OMG!!! I Love Your Story :P Please PLEASE Update!! XD
damn you and the cliffies >.< I was looking forward to seeing what would happen*pouts.*please update soon
Cliffers. >< Any who, your villain, Lucas, has a brilliant characterization. The story has nice detail as well. Can't wait to see what happens next with this original story. ^^
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