YAY! Sonadow goodness! Good chapter. How do write the scenes with the tentacles? Just thinking about it creeps me out. I find it kind of interesting in the story though. Happy that Shadow actually found Sonic. Now, what is Virus planning...? *thinks*
PS~ Thanks for updating! I hope you update again soon!
Author's Response: how I did it?....I have no idea XDD I was half asleep when I drafted the scene though. P.S. i'l try :)
You wrote tentacle rape. *tips hat* Fantastic. Never seen it in Sonic fanfiction before. (Yet it's in a lot of art.... O_o) Great job. Maria robot weirded me out a bit, but that's a good thing. And I'm liking this Virus character more and more. Must be my attraction to villains and your nice characterization of him so far. No suggestions. ^^
Author's Response: ha, thanks, I kinda rished through that scene, i'll proably go back and change somethings later. glad you like Virus, again, not many do.
wow nice chapter, and yay Shadow had finally found sonic, the last part was really cute where sonic was nuzzling shadow's neck lol, anyway please update soon!
Author's Response: lol, thanks, glad you thought it was a nice chappie =]
One last thing:i like the villin you thought up. He's got some nerve of being like that, but for the same, really cool.^0^
You rock!!!
Author's Response: lol, awsome another Virus fan XD
Not bad, but I don't know if I already reviewed this. But, if I didn't....great job. Theirs little or lot of emotion, and that is good. I give you 100/99 because I don't know why Shadow is like that, all of the others trying to make him feel better.
OH well. hope you update.
Rainbowhedghog23
Author's Response: wow...everyone seems to be complaining or commenting on too much emotion.........-.- i'm actully pretty insensitive, so to me it doesn't seem like it. i'll work on that though. AND my rating dropped......POO. ah well I guess I just have to do a bit better, ne?
Intriguing twists and turn, with a rather irritating villain, I cannot wait to see more to this!
Author's Response: thanks =] don't like the villain?....aw, I think he's ok X] you wont have to wait too long [hopefully]
I like this Virus character and the whole 'lure the dude to my secret lair~' thing. It's been done before, but you present it in an original fashion, and for that, I tip my hat to you. That's hard at times. All in all, well done, just watch your spelling. Once or twice, you got some homophones switched. 'Kay? Keep up the great work. ^^
Author's Response: thanks, I think ur the only person (besides moi) that likes him. I know huh? lol, I didn't even think of that, it's just how the story played out in mah noggin. but thanks =] ah, homophones...hate those things, well, yeah...I don't really have a beta and I never really go back and read the chapter I just wrote....maybe I should start huh?.....lol
This story is getting very interesting!! Thanks for updating!! I hope that you update again soon!!
PS~ I just have one thing to ask you though,
Are you gonna update any of your other stories? I'm not trying to be rude or anything, just wondering. I know that you must have other thing to do though.
Author's Response: lol, glad you think so. no problem I hope so to =] PS~ nah, it's not being rude, just a question lol, um, yeah I deleted all the ones that, per the rules, wern't allowed, but i continue them on FF.net
>.< I want more >.< Your stories always rock and I hope to see more of this one soon
Author's Response: lol, glad you like =]
omg, i really like the story, i'm just mad at the villain lol, and you kept Shadow nicely done, but Sonic have been switching emotions here and there. overall i really what you did, so please keep up the good work and update soon.
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