Very good! I love it! *claps*
I've had simillar ideas of my own but this is so much better, please keep writing^^
NICE! THIS IS AMAZING! PLEASE FINISH THIS!!!
This is great!
I love the way you've styled it. It's new, something different.
This is a wonderful piece of work. I hope to see it continue.
Where to start? Well, so far this is awesome. I quite like how indepth and detailed you are with things such as Sonics backgorund, Manics care, and the rights and abuse of mobians. It's so interesting!
I'm eagerly awaiting another chapter : D I want to see just what will happen with Shadows fostering xD Poor Sonic is going to have his hands full.
I'm sorry, I can't finish reading this! It's really good, but I get overly emotional! Sorry
I like the whole "insectivore" part. Sonic is an insectivore and I'm glad you show that in this. ^^ I've eaten scorpion. It was good, but the exoskeleton got stuck in my teeth. Worms taste kinda like peanuts, though. Any who, excellent chapter. I have no suggestions. You did wonderfully, and the ending was great. ^^ I like the Neo Mobian idea.
Yay, an update!^^
Thank you for making the chappies always so long.
An...easter egg...? Not manic, right? Though I do like the way you use all those characters in your AU. :D
Hmm...stuff to happen during the six weeks. I think I would like to see Shadow and Manic fight. Sonic could also use a rivalry of theirs to encourage both of them to be quicker than the other to adopt civilized behaviour.
I would also like to see Sonic going and talking to Maria. She needs to explain her actions! If she likes Shadow so much, why is he so abused? Can she maybe even help Sonic to make him recover? She surely would prefer Shadow to become intelligent, right?
Also, how about Sonic getting sick in a later week? In between them, can Shadow and Manic take care of him while he's bed-ridden?
Then, I would hope Shadow's band is removed soon...he's still walking on all fours, right? I wanna see him stand up! ^^
Also, maybe Sonic should face his fear of the circus. Watch a show, perhaps?
And we could maybe have a flashback of his childhood...
Plus, I'd like to see Knuckles or Tails appear. But that was just a random side-thought.
So far, wonderful work. I think Sonic curled up on the backseat must ahve looked rather cute, but BOO for those humans who would take him for a pet because of it!
Oh, and Sonic should get a raise. He deserves it. Great fic! :D
*Squeals* Oh my I adore this story. I would love to see more about the legal situation with Mobians. Sonic is written quite well IMO, and you’ve managed to keep that cocky personality of his that I’ve seen so many authors toss aside.
I cannot wait to see how this progresses, and of course my heart goes out to Shadow.
Hey, I like it a lot!^^ I adore the fact that you managed to get in so many cameos - granted, I do hope they make Chris a circus pet instead - but it just fits so well!^^ I have a lot of them showing up in my own sonadow fic, too - anyway!
I like it that Sonic is still such a racer and show-off, a fic is always so much better if the characters are closer to their canon selves. Also, the idea is quite good - I just hope that Shadow isn't eh...completely retarded? ...from lack of stimulants. Poor Maria, though, but they shouldn't have made him a circus pet in the first place! What's the legal situation of a Mobian in this world exactly? Great fic! :)
At least it's not Windows 95. That's one of the worst programs ever. *shudders* Now, about the story: One typo where you said "time" twice in a row, but that was it. I like this plot line and the injustice served upon the mobians really angers me, so you put that in correctly. No suggestions. This is a fantastic chapter. ^^
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