Nawww |3 So sweet. X3 Keep it up! I want to read more!
Author's Response: more will be coming so don't worry
Sonic is sophisticated? ...I like it. And his personality reminds me of a book character for some odd reason. Oh well, I like it all the same. No suggests, seeing as how you only had a grammar mistake at the beginning that bothered me: 'keep me warm' is 'keep myself warm' because that's more proper; and a grammar issue in the middle: "My my my" should be "My, my, my". But the rest is well done. Nice idea, and I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^
Author's Response: Mistakes happen and I'll try to fix it up with the next chapter. And yes...I made Sonic sophisticated....it's the end of the world as we know it....The next one will be up either the end of today or tomorrow morning
Great so far!! I love to see Shadow as a slave Weird, huh? Makes things more interesting in the story!! Hope to see you update soon!!
Author's Response: Oh it'll be updated shortly.....I keep getting such god reviews and good reviews makes Night a happy panda ^_^
more plz
Yay ^^ Story where Shadow's the slave!! WHOOT! Interesting so far, but Sonic seems so kind and stuff, why would he want a slave to do 'naughty' things with? Well I guess this is sonadow and you're the author ^^ Btw get on IM!! Me wanna rp wif yous T^T
Author's Response: well he wanted and pet and Shadow is a pet as well as a bed slave. and me ish on IM
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