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Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2008 2:30 PM · For: Comatose
'Some of the chili landed back on his Mighty Morphin Power Ranger plate and he made a small face before he wiped the mess up with his finger, revealing a battle ready white ranger.' Great sentence. XD

Anyways, a very deep story. Brilliant and original. I'm going to favorite this. You certainly did something right with your ideas. A few grammar mistakes, but overall, I love this story. Excellent. I tip my hat to you for this awesome writing. ^^

Author's Response: LOL, I had fun writing that line XD glad you thought it was original, that's what I was goin' for :) Again :) I'm not good with the English language, so expect grammar errors in all my writing, I'm too lazy to get a beta, so I take responsibility for all my mistakes :D Thanks for the review, as usual. And I'm very glad you liked the story. AND THANK YOU KINDLY FOR THE FAV :DDDD


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