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Make sure your next one has more kinks worked out.

Be sure to spell your main
character's name right

This is just a personal prefrence (I'm sure someone here could agree) but yeah, more description and detailing.

mmmmm......I think that's all for me
good job on your first fic. tho ;)

Author's Response: I have edited, and thanks! =)