you must make another story like this!
Nice fic, but do you have to use those japanease words? It's a bit annoying when I must look at the bottom of fic anytime I read a japanease sentence. The jap words are completly useless here anyways, so why do you put them?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it. As for the Japanese, I already mentioned somewhere in there that because Sonic and the others are originally Japanese, I'd be using a fair bit of it. Sorry to have caused you confusion.
aw, kawaii! very adorable. charm and cream... sorry, i dont know exactly what theyre like, but it was still a nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for your support! I had to figure out what exactly to do... and it took me a while, before realizing I wanted to do a chapter about Charmy, who is my favourite character, but since he's so young, and Cream was the only one his age who wasn't paired with someone, it became a "Cheam" chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it, as much as I did writing it. ^^
:rolls eyes: dont talk about WBoD to me... :shudders: I thought this was very well written. Knux was so... not unhappy, but not really happy either... hollow. Nice use of jap, although if it was Nijis first language he would have asked where he was, and who knux was in jap too. (Doko ni? Anata wa? or something similar...)
Author's Response: *smiles* Thanks for the review. I was intending to make Knux feel a little lonely, and such... As for the Japanese, it isn't actually Niji's first language. As you may notice, a lot of my material will contain a few Japanese words, since I am so fond of Japanese. I'm learning a bit of it... mainly through songs. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! ^^
he alive!! :glomps: nice chapter... really emotive. is that the end? or more?
Author's Response: *is glomped* Oof... heh... And you'll be happy to know that this isn't the end. There's still around 9 chapters left. I just gotta hope college doesn't overwork me, and that I don't get writer's block.
Poor Sonic... and poor Shadow... it was going so well too...
Author's Response: And it always will. ^.~ Chapter 6 iproved to be very tough to write. I had to counter writer's block, and a whole load of college work to get it done. I hope Boku no kage continues. I'm finding it very interesting too. ^^
Ach! ;_; What happened to Sonic? What effects will Shadow's DNA have on him? Why isn't chapter 5 up yet?!?! ^^;;;
Author's Response: Sonic? Hmmm... read the next few chapters, and see for yourself. *winks* Chapter 5 and 6 are up, in case you haven't read them yet. ^.^
Hmm...never been a big fan of Tails/Chris, but that's just my opinion ^_^;; Anymoo, I'm just curious to see where you are going with this story. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! ^.^ Bye!
Author's Response: *grins* Tails and Chris seem cute together, which is why I paired them. It's rather intriguing to know that two completely different species can be in love. But anyway, thanks again!
Howdy! I like how this story is written from different POVs. Yeeeah..so is Amy going to try to ruin this relationship or do you have something else in mind? Also, this story made meh go "aaaaawwww!!" So fluffy! I'll be waiting for the next chapter
Author's Response: Sorry I haven't responded... I'm just getting used to how everything is laid out here. But I can't say whether Amy will try anything or not. Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like it! ^^
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