I just finished reading your entire story, and I must say, though I fail at writing fan fictions, I can spot a good one when I see (read) it, and this story is AMAZING. I pretty much squealed (and fangasm'd, mind you) during each chapter. All the chapters flow together, none of the later ones contradicting the previous, which can sometimes be hard to do, especially for longer stories/fanfics. there are a few minor spelling/word errors, but writing lengthy chapters such as these (not to mention that you also have to take care of things going on in life and school and what not) it's tough to catch all the tiny errors. That aside, your fanfic leaves me eager for more~ Can't wait for the next update, and keep up the good work! I'll try to write a review for every chapter from here on (if my lazy streak doesn't get in the way o.o). I will forever be one of your faithful readers, though :3
~Mara
Author's Response: Woah, thanks! :D Happy to hear that^^ To make sure that none of the later chapters contradict the previous ones, I actually work with a plotline I have worked out and writen down before even starting the first chapter. ;) Hope you enjoy the update!
Man, you could make millions if you sold this... Not really, Sega would kick your ass. :P
"he asked, and Shadow could feel the blue hero's hand sneak over and gloves fingers naturally entangling with his own as the blue hedgehog continued with a bit more sombre tone." Should be gloved fingers.
:P Not that it matters.
Author's Response: Argh, you're right. Should go back and fix this.^^° Thanks!
It is awesome to hear from you again, and an awkward moment with the guardian is always a plus in my book. Good luck finding your bread.
Author's Response: Thanks! XD Yeah, awkward!Knuckles scenes a brilliant to write, nothing funnier than a flustered Sonic. :P Hope you like the new chapter!
Awesomeness as usual.
Japan? O.o Must be cool.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D And yes. Yes, it is. Even if it is even crazier than all of my fanfic. XD
OMFG YOU FUCKING UPDATED FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!
WOOOOOOOOOO!
I feel like a fangirl (boy).
I have not even read it yet.
Author's Response: (bows) rare though it may be, update I did. And channeling Yoda, I seem to be. XD
I have reread this story so many times and it need gets old! 8D
I will give you my first born child if this story updates soon.
Author's Response: No child as payment needed, but thanks for the offer! XD Enjoy! :P
Okay, you really need to update this novel of a fanfiction because it has been over 5 months since you have last updated this. Please update. I beg of you.
50 chapters is a milestone, and I am sure it must be very difficult coming up with the rest of the story. You can do it though! I believe in you! ^_^
Author's Response: Hi there! Naw, the entire story is pretty much finished in my head, just typing it down takes time. XD But here it is, THE SAGA CONTINUES! XD Thabks for the comment!^^
Taranea, you have accomplished something. You have written a very long story that never fails to please people. It is an accomplishment for even a proffesional writer to do as such. You have written a novel. A very long novel in fact. I googled about how many pages would be compared to word count. This story would have 800 pages! :o I have never read anything that long before... And I hardly even read that much. Congradulations! :D
Author's Response: Hahah, thanks! :D I have to admit, I don't even know how many pages combined it would be, the chapters are separate files. XD Though I think it's well over 200 000 words.^^° Hah, I wish my essays for uni would be that long and that well-received! ;)
oh my god the suspense is killing me!
Author's Response: Glad you like it, here's more!^^
"Release the hounds"...
Priceless! XD
Another great chapter. I'm excited that we're ramping up for the final showdown! The last little bit with Lazar was fun, especially with him 'threatening' Sonic.
And I can't help but wonder what Silver was trying to say... I hope we'll find out eventually. ;)
Author's Response: Actually, we're going to find out this chapter. :P Happy to hear you enjoyed the showdown, more of that to come!^^ Thanks for the review, always looking forward to them!^^
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