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Name: Shadow (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 12:31 PM · For: Chapter 48
o.o OMG....I hope ya get the next chapter out soon. I wanna see what happens, and fast!

Author's Response: eh-heh, I try. XD Hope you like ;)


Name: chevykkj (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 12:23 PM · For: Chapter 48

Hello Tarenea, I just wanted to let you know that the only reason i check my e-mail 5 times a day is to see if this story has updated. As you can guess, when I saw this last night at 10:30 I knew that tommorrow`s classes were going to be painful. I ignored my headache and tired eyes and read. And cried. And realized after every scene how much of an amazing story this is. I will forever be a fan and this story and your skill in writing will forever be my favourite, I just really want to know if this is the end of it. I am still in denial that they are gone forever, and i will not allow it until I know that this is how you intend for it to end. I am not trying to persuade you to change the events of the story(although I am still hoping for a happy ending), but just expressing my continuing love nearly a year later. I have a few thoughts as to what I think will come next, if there is anything still to come, so i am on edge not knowing. My point is ; Thank you for continuing to write this story.



Author's Response: Hi there! Wow, thanks. :) That was truly a nice review, it's them that keep me writing. And no, I hate sad endings as much as you do, the cliffie was just kept a bit longer than intended^^° Hope you like the new chapter!


Name: Sonic22 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 2:42 PM · For: Chaos Control Freaks!

Alright, so it took over a week, but I finally got through every chapter, and now that I have there's this empty feeling. You're story is amazingly written with perfect pacing and it's shame that I've gotten through all 46 chapters. Although a tad distracting in the week I had two research papers to write :P "I am currently married to university, and I dunno about you, but I have a feeling it's a rather abusive and controlling relationship" - Agreed!



Author's Response: hahah, hope your research papers went well, and thanks for your comment! :) Enjoy the new chapter!


Name: Aishi the Ghost (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 10:48 AM · For: Chapter 43

>>Never bring a sword to a gun fight

...epic.

And the whole battle scene is simply epic as well.



Author's Response: Thanks.^^ I loved that line, too, there should be more situations where it applies. XD


Name: inkygrim (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 5:56 PM · For: Chapter 46
i love your stories

Author's Response: Thanks!^^


Name: Mystyc Cheez (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 4:39 PM · For: Chapter 46
Ah, I am happy with the way this turned out. I feared that Shadow would be all "I'm going to rip your ass!", but you made him "I don't wanna hurt you..." The reason of my "DON'T MAKE SHADOW DOMINATING AND HAVING ALL THE ADVANTAGES!" was because of that fear. I usually see that in many fanfictions and I despise it. Thank you for going for the best approach. I love you for that ^_^.
Continue with the best story on Earth!

Author's Response: O.o I wouldn't ever do THAT! I prefer my Sonic happy, I would never do anything to him that caused permanent harm or anything.^^° Like the other 'punishments' in this story, you'll notice he always gets off lightly. I much more like writing him when he is a tad annoyed or embarassed (or, well, scared at the most) by any of the predicaments I put him in, *real* Sonic torture is not on the cards – and if he ever gets hurt, you can expect him to take it, but without breaking down – rather swearing revenge. ;) Plus, Shadow in this story has been written way too nice and in love by me to ever seriously hurt Sonic again, all he has is a tough exterior and a big mouth. :P (And, of course, the possibility to tear holes into any and all who think they should try and threaten Sonic...) Thanks for your review! :)


Name: Fade (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 3:19 PM · For: Chapter 46

Can I have your fanfiction babies?  Both of you?

 

And good luck with those exams!



Author's Response: XD I'm too young to have kids! :P But thanks for your review. XD


Name: Shadow (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 10:11 AM · For: Chapter 46
-claps- Absolutely excellent, its good to see another fantastic chapter from you, perfectly satisfying ^^ Can't wait for the next one ^^

Author's Response: It's here, thanks for your review!^^


Name: Shadow (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 6:59 PM · For: Chapter 45
Mmm, this is YUMMEH. I cannot wait for more!!!

Author's Response: There ya go. I aim to please ;)


Name: Mystyc Cheez (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 5:30 PM · For: Chapter 45
Well, the problem is that Shadow has too much of an advantage. Big size, experience, age, and Sonic being chained to a wall. What next, All seven Chaos Emeralds to make Shadow go super? URGH! I hate Shadow being the stronger character!

Author's Response: Yup, Sonic is chained up. That's kinda the shtick of this story. But otherwise... *Sonic and Shadow are expressly described as both the exact same size *Sonic is older – Shadow is only *technically* over 50 years old, in here he's barely seven and Sonic teases him occasionally about it *Sonic so far got just as much, if not more scenes where he could and did kick ass – the dancing, sword fighting, taking out the slave hunters and nearly breaking Drago's hip spring to mind... - so much that people complained *Shadow* wasn't doing enough. *The one time Sonic and Shadow actually brawled, Sonic was winning before they broke it off *Sonic is not exactly passive since he *instigated* the whole lemon. Seriously, just because somebody decides to play 'catcher', that doesn't make them 'weak'. It's just one of several possible ways they chose to have fun tonight, s'all. They're equal partners.


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