OH MY.
*FANS SELF FURIOUSLY. IN ALL CAPS. FOLLOWED BY ETERNAL FANGIRLING OF TARANEA AND SKYBLAZE*
Maybe I'll come up with a more coherent review later, but I doubt it... It took me two hours to read this. Sentence. by. sentence.
Ten stars, forever and ever.
Author's Response: *bows* Is that so? Can't wait to hear your reaction to *this* chapter then...XD Thanks for the review!^^
Awww, no one's done a review for this chapter yet? I'll delay my next-chapter reading for a couple minutes to write one. :D
Firstly, you handled all the dialogue really well. I find it hard to write sections that are almost all talk, especially when the people involved aren't moving. Here, I didn't even think about how Sonic and Shadow stayed in one place!
My only complaint is that it's too short... But the fact that there are two chapters up today should make up for that. XD
Author's Response: Yeah, it wasn't really too short, it's just that you can't upload the longer documents on this site, or else it says you're over the max character cap, so...yeah. There's already been a few chaps that I had to split in half :P
I had to noisebleed at this chapter. XD I love how you can put humor into everything. Also, your references are awesome! =D
Author's Response: Thanks!^^ Can't forget the humour...:P
AGHCK! TOO. MANY. BIG WORDS! *Brain explodes*
AGHCK! TOO. MUCH. INTIMACY!
*Brain Implodes*
-raises hand-
No way were you going to let it be that SIMPLE of an Ending! you had to do something good to tease us all Sonadow fans! YOU RULE! This is catching to A Matter of Trust!
did I mention your awsome for writting this?
Author's Response: (bows) Thanks!^^ I try my best. And now, let's watch our boys get into ever more trouble, shall we...? ;)
Uh oh, I think Sonic and Shadow have found themselves a rather large problem. Black Doom shall die! Ugh, epic cliffhanger here...
Ussually I know what to expect, but I didn't expect this, neither did I expect the breakdancing in the last chapter. Great job with the unexpectedness. ^_^
This is just a miniseries for tv waiting to happen. If only a bigshot tv producer would read this. xD
Seems the couple have some work to do... Please udate ASAP!
Author's Response: Heh, I like my cliffhangers. XD also, glad I can still surprise after more than 40 chapters. ;) thanks for the review!
*Raises hand*... SORTA! I guessed the riot, epic battle scene with obvious comic antics... final revelation of the emerald, and some sort of conspiracy theory already occurring...
Still wondering what's going on in the other dimension... And why it seems time travels faster at Moebius, and slower in medieval world...
And i remember the hover skates being brought, but the Mag? And Shadow was being critical of Sonic introducing breakdancing...
Oh, wow, I'm on the edge of my seat, can't wait to see what happens next...
But one thing still bugs me though, if Moebius if facing end-of-the-world kinda disaster, will Renaissance realm have it too? I must haz epic writing to read...
Superb as always, and you're still proving me right... it keeps gettin' better...
Author's Response: Hahah, yeah, you're right, Shadow's quite the hypocrite, isn't he? XD He had that gun stored in his quills, they have quite the large storage space there. ;) If the medieval world is facing an apocalypse, too, they don't know it, though. No Chaos detectors.^^° Time passes reltively the same, though. :)
Now this is what I'm talking about! Seems like we're getting somewhere. I mean, the last few chapters, while good, just felt like a bunch of running in place. This is moving forward again ^^
Author's Response: Glad you like.^^
MORE MORE... WE MUS HAZ MORE!!!!
As always, epic writing... I'm dying to see what's next... this is like, the best sonadow story EVER!!! I mean, this one is like up there in the top three... And scourge deserved that fire-punch in the crotch... but, I just can't wait to see what's next.... Leaving us hanging? Really? That's so cruel... haha
PS- Is it just me, or does this story get better and better the further along I get?
PPS- *from earlier review* REVOLTREVOLTREVOLT!!!! lol...
Author's Response: heh, glad you think this story is getting better and better, that means I'm improving. :P And yup, it's certainly in the top three in *length*...@.@ Thanks for your review, hope you enjoy the new chapter, too! :D
OMG. OMG. O.M.G.
Can I leech out your writing skills and inject them into myself somehow? Because I kind of definitely want a piece of your awesome. Just a little one? I swear you won't even notice...
In all seriousness, I read this with a huge grin on my face. My hands are actually shaking as I type, because it was so. freaking. exciting. I didn't see any of it coming, except Sally walking in on the boys arguing, because that was just too funny to pass up.
Now I feel like pulling my hair out because I'm so worked up, and can't find out what happens until your next update! Waaaaaah~
Author's Response: Heh, wow, thanks!^^ I'm glad to hear you thought the action was well done. :) My writing skills, of course, are mostly the result of copius amounts of Terry Pratchett :P Next update will be coming along, although this isn't it, because I had actually forgotten to post a chapter in between...^^° But thanks for your review still! XD
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