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Name: shoelace (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 9:18 AM · For: Chaos Control Freaks!

I just read chapter 27 and decided that you are an awfully cruel author. Can't believe you left it on a cliffhanger like thaat! D:

 

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: yes. Yes, I am. However, I hope I'm also a pretty *good* author so you'll forgive me when you read the new chapter. :P Thanks for the comment!


Name: AnnZie (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 4:45 PM · For: Chaos Control Freaks!
I love how you always keep us the readers in suspense and anticipation to what may happened next, also making us wait impatiently for Sonic and Shadow to come together =P.

Author's Response: Thank you! No worries, some suspense to remain to the very end...;)


Name: Poppy Mare (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:15 PM · For: Chapter 27

OMG I hate and love you. Hate, cus I skipped dinner to finish reading this. Love, well. Look at this! So much detail, so much info, I LOVE IT!! :D I hope you update soon.



Author's Response: (bows) happy to hear that! XD Hope you like the new chappie as well...:)


Name: secretidentity (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 1:36 AM · For: Chapter 27

Absolutely amazing story, so far! As a reader, I feel deeply invested in Sonic and Shadow's plight and very badly want to see them come out on top of this challenge.

I really enjoyed how you handled this chapter in particular -- phobias are no small matter, and Sonic's panic attack was well played. I wish Shadow would make a move . . . the anticipation is killing me (although it makes sense that it's taking this long, given their situation)!



Author's Response: Heh, thank you! I'm glad sonic's phobia came over well. And yeah, this is probably the sonadow fanfic with the slowest progress ever, but I'm glad you're enjoying it!^^


Name: deathblast (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 2:37 PM · For: Chapter 27
C'mon Shadow, just pin him down and rape him already,lol anyway Great chapter =D

Author's Response: XD THAT would be one way to go about it, yes...


Name: Sonic the Hedgehog (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 6:22 PM · For: Chapter 27
I must say that I would like to see them come together at some point, BUT... I still like the story either way and can't wait to see how you plan on them coming together. ^^

Author's Response: Heh, you don't think I'd seriously publish it on this site *without* them coming together? Everybody would hate me forever! XD But thanks for your review, this is why it's fun to write! :)


Name: Shadening (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 6:04 PM · For: Chapter 27
I only have a problem with certain things Sonic does, since you can't fully like someone(I guess) This was great since his phobia makes him seem cute and helplessish^^

Author's Response: Heh, glad you like.^^ And no worries, we all have our own interpretation of the characters, that's okay. :)


Name: Shadow (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 2:31 PM · For: Chapter 27
GAH! Rollercoaster moment! Lemme off this ride already!

BTW In reaction to the response of my last review, apparently you completely missed my point.

Just because they would finally admit to one another about feelings, doesn't necessarily mean the story would end. But the fact you keep throwing in these up and down moments "Does he like me? No? Yes? No?" makes me scream "JUST GET IT OVER WITH! ITS GETTING OLD!"

THAT'S the point I'm trying to get across.

On another note though, this is still really really good, reading every word of it. BTW, the reason the ribbon kept changing was because its saying whether or not it is an ACTIVE featured story. Blue means active, red means retired (due to inactivity)

Author's Response: Aaah, I see. That's the point of the colours. In regards to their relationship...well, I think you can see them growing steadily closer together, but that's just me. Sorry if it seems like an annoying roller-coaster ride to you. And while the story wouldn't end with them finally admitting it, that particular ark would end, which I don't quite want yet...sooo, you'll have to be patient for a little while longer. :P Hope you enjoy the next chapter!


Name: SoniKlos (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 1:39 PM · For: Chapter 27
aww, its fluffy and cute, then a little more preverted. I love it!
great job, keep it up!

Author's Response: ^^ thanks!


Name: Sonic the Hedgehog (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 1:26 PM · For: Chapter 26
I wish I could get along with Shadow. -Whimper-

Good chapter though! ^^

Author's Response: Aw, no worries, I'm not an angst-writer. XD have fun!



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