Take note, your story cut off

Author's Response: Yikes, so it does. How'd that happen?! I clearly remember formatting the parts that were missing...but anyway, should eb fixed now. Thanks for pointing it out, nobody else did and I'd never have noticed! :D

I sense a fight^^

Author's Response: too darn right....:P

Oh thank GAWD you updated; I thought you were dead or something. Anyway, it's good to have you back!
This chapter is, of course, very nice; little, maltreated Tails just kinda breaks my heart! Also, if you leave us at this cliffhanger for any extended period of time, my curiosity neurons will overload and my head will likely burst into flames. So yeah. I hope you update again soon!

Author's Response: (bows) Thanks! :D If you look at my ffnet profile, you will also find that 'maltreated Tails' is my specialty.^^ I hope nothing has burst aflame over on your side yet, though, and thanks for your review! Hope you like the new chappie, too.^^

Oh what will Shadow do? Hopefully nothing involving "putting things in other's...", that'd be the worst possible idea to carry out in front of Tails.

I think I died when I read the line "Tickle attack!"

Author's Response: Hahah, glad you liked that scene! I do admit, I had a bit too much fun with that dialogue. :P

Am I mad for not reading this sooner. I originally stopped at chapter 4 because this story didn't appeal to me. However, I had nothing else to do so I read through the entire story, and boy was my first impression of it wrong.

I am completely impressed with this story and I would really like to see where you take it. Granted there were a few grammatical errors in one or two chapters, but that is completely understandable.

Still though, you have me absolutely hooked. Well Done Taranea! 5/5 Stars for sure!

Author's Response: Heh, happy to hear it!^^ Thanks for the long review, I always enjoy hearing how people approach my stories. :D