That was entertaining, along with a shortness that will allow for some homosexual enjoyment without consuming the day with extensive reading! Well done, but I notice that Shadow is out of character in the instance of "self...less...ness?" I would imagine the Ultimate Lifeform has a bit more of a skill with words after some 50 years of life.

Perverts in it for the sex scene have been let down, but anyone who wants to imagine it their own way has a wide open canvas™ to depict the act by themselves - beautiful concept, I must say. GOOD JOB D:<

this is funny!

Hilarious. I don't think it's breaking the rules if it's a one-shot. It's obvious you put effort into your stories, as history has proven. The subject matter is brilliant. I've always wondered if they ever fought about this. XD

Author's Response: Ha ha ha. Glad you found it funny :D Thank you. Thank you. and yes, lol, I'm sure they argue about a lot of things XDD thanks for the review :o