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PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ DO ANOTHER CHAPTER IVE WAITED MONTHS AND ITS KILLING ME!!!!! lol please

i knew it was shadow and fuck his dad! i mean what the hell kind of person pays with there child?! you should keep this going 2

hey good job.
i want to see more of your story.
i like the idea.
just kidding I LOVE IT!!!
keep the good job.

I find this plot generally hard to believe, but at the same time, an original and very good one. (Ever read Life of Pi? Same issue with that book.) I'm wondering how you put pictures in your stories. Mind telling me?

Any who, well written, especially the dialogue of a child. To me, dialogue of children is hard because...well, I'm obviously no longer a child in the physical sense. You did well with the naïve unawareness and frightened air of young Shadow. I can't wait to see how this story turns out. Very well done and an interesting concept. (lolwhorehouselol) Great job, as always. ^^

Author's Response: I know, it's hard to believe, but that's the point in fan-fiction x3 I upload a picture to Photobucket and then copy the HTML code and paste it in ^^ Thanks alot for the detailed feedback, I appreciate it ^^