Great job! i love the way you kept Sonic and Shadow incharacter, very well-written. Im looking forward to more of your writing.
Now go update He is my Master!
Okay, I'm a horrible person for taking this long to write a review for something so very awesome. I was really looking forward to seeing what you did with this, and my expectations were totally surpassed (I had some pretty high ones, too). This is completely in-character and creatively written, while mixing humor and eroticism in the best way possible. Awesome! :D
Also, is it just me, or does this feel like it could be used as an epilogue for He Is My Master? I mean, I don't wanna assume anything about the ending of that fic, but the relationship dynamic would carry over well, in my opinion.
Anyhow, I love it! Now go update He Is My Master before the anticipation kills me. :3
Oh wow.
Awesome lemon :)
looking forwad to reading some more of your stuff :)
WOW! i never knew i liked reading from shadows' POV! i think that you captured sonic and shadow really well! it sounds like a sonic x episode, broadcasting in my head as i read.. this is my first review of anything EVER, so i apologize if i come off as a total waffle-head (which i'm not in real life. i would have eaten me by now) but anywho, great job! :D
First and foremost: OMG that was so awesome for a lemon! You continue to show talent that impresses me. +Featured.
Second, I understand that this was 2 shot. But what really stuck gold with me, was the kind of relationship Sonic had with Shadow. It was absolutely perfect and in character for the two. But what drove it home was the fact that Sonic would NEVER submit to anyone but Shadow, and when he did, he was very submissive, almost like a slave. THAT is what drove the story home for me and I would love to see a full story develope from this concept, either as a continuance, or as a sequal of sorts. I'd do something myself, but I already have a Sonadow comic in the works, pus I got SU Chaos Season 2 coming up next spring.
But first thing's first: You SERIOUSLY need to go finish He is My Master first! G'wan! Write!
Gosh, i just loved this story :D!!
Your a very good author, ya' know that? X3 you write so many epic stuff..i just fall in love with your stories completely :D!!
I loved the fact that you made sonic sound cocky and stubborn where shadow wanted him to 'submit' |3
Please, keep up with your awsome work ^-^
Ooo... I've been wondering if/when you'd try writing a lemon. I agree with Takashi: this fic diverges a bit from your usual genre, but you've still managed to present your unique voice and writing style in full force, which makes this a pleasure to read.
The only problem now is that I can't decide which fic I want to see updated first... Either way, I can't wait to see what you do with this. :3
Author's Response: Heh, thanks!^^ Always a pleasure to get one of your reviews - yup, just wanted to try my hand at a lemon for once. :P I want to write for every genre at least once. ;) but this is only a two-shot...for now. Depends on the reviews. XD
I do recall reading the whole thing on ff.net. *muses* This is a different genre than your other writing (and for that, you already gain my approval--I can't write this stuff, thus I am in no position to critique) and despite the fact that it's written in present tense, I enjoyed the story greatly. Interesting use of PoV, tense, and genre. Great work. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! Yup, for some reason whenever I go first person POV it slips into present tense. *shrugs* oh well. Happy to hear you liked it! :D
Hey
Cool story
you rekon you could update it soon as well as he is my master?
This story seems to be pannign along well and so does the other
you seem to have good spelling becuase i haven't spotted any errors in this story and barely any in the other one
but please continue writing the two stories
Author's Response: will do, thanks for commenting!
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