That was tense, gritty, and flowed in so many ways. Your switching of PoVs gave me a good chance to understand what's up with Blue. And once again, great style. It's original and very expressive; it can reach certain levels other methods can't. (Speaking of The Method, that was interesting.) The end was perfect. The initial set up of the story itself really interests me. Can't wait to see what you dish out next. ^^

Author's Response: Thankyou very much ^^ Hopefully the next chapter should be up sooner, I have already started writing it! It is back to Shadow's PoV, but I really enjoyed writing from Sonic's PoV, so I might write from his PoV again. Thanks again for the review!

It's interesting how you use flashbacks before the situation they may bear resemblance with to give us a very subtle foreshadow. How their life used to be gives a good moment for the reader to step back and realize the differences from then and now. (Quite frankly, I think the situation's rather a pantomime. It's almost like a warped, nay demented, mirroring of their former life in a way.)

Once again, awesome style. And I really like how Shadow mentions that Sonic's just so messed up he probably doesn't know what's going on anymore. Yet, I can tell there's still some affection that he has left for the blue hedgehog. Tails's part was interesting, as it gives insight into how Shadow and Sonic hadn't been caught after all these murders. You really know how to connect things. I like that. Keep up the good work. ^^

Author's Response: Thankyou:) HA! I never thought of it as a pantomime! You are so right!

Holy crap, I love your style. The opening to the story was genius. I still can't get over the style. I've seen this kind before, but not many on this site really use it. (Perhaps one or two have.) First chapter was what really hit it off for me. Wonderful. And we all know first chapters are ridiculously important.

The concept in itself is original. And how you portray their relationship as more of a love-hate one as time progresses upon them makes me draw connections that your narrative seems to imply. Sonic on drugs? Shadow a sadist? I like that; the story has a dark, woebegone feel to it with a good dose of a detached first person narrative.

I honestly have no suggestions. Can't wait to see what you dish out next. ^^

Author's Response: Wow, thankyou for the awesome review! This makes me feel really good about the story ^^ More wierdness will be on the way...