I LIKE LASERS. Oh... wait.. all you promised was legs of gold? Kin I have SALTED NUTS?
Author's Response: NEVER! >O
Since everything goes back to the way they were, what about the Master Emerald?
Just Kiddin'. Great Story! :D
Gah, when I saw the word 'End' in the chapter, I almost screamed. But the promise of a continuation relieved me. Don't scare me like that! D:
Anyway, onto the actual chapter. So with the appearance of Topaz, I can assume this takes place in the Sonic X universe? If so, haha, I'm pretty lost in it. I only saw bits of the first season. And the ending was a great mix of an aw-worthy moment and a cliffhanger. It'll be interesting to see how you guys will do regarding the last line, like it implies this whole story was something like a one-night stand to Shads.
I'll be looking forward to the sequel!~
GAH. You guys are absolutely mean to leave it off there. I wanted to see them admit their feelings for one another at the very least!
I think I'm gonna cry.
-sniff-
Its not exactly a sad ending, cause I know you guys said there would be more.
But it comes pretty close. I SERIOUSLY hope they get together for real at some point. Or I'm gonna go nuts.
The Alcohol was very smart.
Yeah... I bet he's kidding.
After reviewing this gem on ff.net, I'm surprised that the actual fic has been updated this far. Not that I'm complaining, of course. It seems like Shadow is also able to watch the Master Emerald better than a certain echidna can. Will you write more about about Shadow's ability to use it?
Anyways, I'm possibly repeating myself again but I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic! Sonic's playful naughty self and Shadow's denial and internal struggles amuse me to no end. You have an interesting way of keeping their relationship balanced between uke and seme.
Keep up the good work and 'gratz on the feature!
Author's Response: :) Thank you very much for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and yes, you will be seeing more of Shadow and how he uses the Emerald in the future. A lot more is to come. :)
This story is getting rather interesting though time within the chapters are starting to slow in it's tracks but I like the effects. I haven't spotted any errors yet so that's good. Now I take it that this is actually a role play and see how it's updated so quickly. Interesting way to create it I'd say and it's the first time I've ever seen that kind of story creating but it's doing nicely in your and the reader's favor from all the reviews I'm seeing.
All from what I can see, you are doing quite well and the detail is making my spine quiver in anticipation for the next chapter my dear.
-Ceres
Author's Response: There's going to be some "filler" chapters to give Sonic and Shadow some time to bond but there is a very good plot that's going to be coming back into the story. Although it may not seem like it right now, all the chapters are important and a lot from the beginning will be recalled in future chapters to come. Keep enjoying! :P
Author's Response: Oh and thank you for your well thought out review. ^_^ I like when people review the stories with a little more detail other than 'That's great!' =D But I'll take that too. xD
lol shadow is so cute and hilarioius i love how sonic was all treating him like a baby! :D oooooohhhh i wonder who's gonna b the bitch next!
I read this whole story in one day now its my fav in this site! plz update im dying here! xD
Author's Response: :) Aw, thanks! I'm glad you like it. ^_^
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