Shadow is a BOY!

Did you even try to check your grammar or spelling? Did you think no one would care or notice, or did you think that it was just okay to post something like this without any sort of spell check?

This sort of writing is absolutely unacceptable. It's so hard on the eyes, that I couldn't even take in the story for all the grammatical distractions. I'm sorry, but you really need to pay close attention in English. If a high school English teacher would fail you on this, don't post it on the site.

Author's Response: yeah i know my spelling is bad...am getting better at it now but i am paying attention in english

Things to check for you: Spelling. Grammar. Capitalization. The Home link in the menu here and the first post about the 1000 words per chapter rule. And the mixed script and non-scripted text is annoying to read.
I'm sorry to be so harsh (perhaps), but this can be better.

Author's Response: Alright and i thought i used 1000 words how do you check without having to count them up if you have 1000 words?