That is bittersweet...and very, very sad. You've managed to portray Shaodw saying 'I love you' and making it completely believable, which is incredible. Hopefully Sonic's memory will be regained; and poor Shaodw. Killing all those people on no grounds. Well, not no grounds...he should've murdered G.U.N predomianntly instead. I'm eager to see how this will turn out...very excited.
You've succeeded in severely depressing me. :'( Still, a fantastic chapter, though. Hopefully it'll onyl be temproary side-effect; if it's permanent then I will thoroughly dislike the story for about 10 seconds and then it's appeal will hit me again. This is an awesome story and it must be updated!
Oh, God. The story actually made me cry, AGAIN! Right at the part where Sonic opened his eyes. I am such a sap, but hell, this story has a perfect, surprising twist at every corner!
Speaking of twists... poor, poor Shadow; it must be so awful to come back to an amnesiac lover (not that it isn't nice to find out that he's not dead)! Either way, I really, really hope that Sonic gets his memory back. I mean... it could be only a 'side-effect' to his short 'coma', right?
Keep up the awesome work! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! =D
I'm with Shadow.
Anything but that!!
Sonic's alive! Yay!!
But he doesn't remember Shadow or the love they shared or the moments they spent together or the times they saved each other or the- alright I have to stop there before I start crying again.
This was something I somewhat imagined would happen!
Hmm... cold, threathening glare, no knowledge of current surroundings, doesn't know Shadow....
Let me guess, Sonic's mind put his memories on-lock and reverted to his original 'programming'?
Anyway, can't wait for more!
please tell me that's not it! :(
I love this story.....I'm crying.... ; . ; please tell me for the love of God that there's more!!!!
Dude, I REALLY hope there's more coming. The last thing I wanna see is a "Cloverfield" ending. This story was getting so good too.
Bah. Sorry for the bad grammar, I realized that after I posted it. And for some reason it wont let me delete it, so I can repost it without the misspellings.
Oh well, I guess it doesn't matter all that much, you could still make sence of it I guess.
It's early in the morning is all. >.
Author's Response: Aw, it's alright. ^_^ And thanks a lot. I'm not sure what I'll be doing after Secrets Among Us ends aside from updating An Old Friend's Obsession. I may post another story, but I don't know yet. D:
Clearly the story is comming too an end. I just hope, beside's your other project. "An Old Friends Obsession" you will find the time to start a new story.
You truelly have a gift, and it would be a shame too let it go to waste. Ofcourse you don't "have" to do it. But I would just enjoy seeing more from you.
Actually. I'm enjoying your stories so much, that your my most favorite writer. But thats beside the point. I have no idea as to what your future plans are, but perhaps you could make this your living. Writing books and whatnot.
Now, too the storie it self.
Great work as always, you still keep me in suspence each chapter. I just hope that in the end, Sonic will somehow he resurected, and that they can still be together.
Obviously thats your call though, but whatever you decide. Great job on the storie on all.
Love too see more, someday.
Really creative! And poor Shadow for having lost his mind :( Anyone would lose it after a loss like that. :(
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