Hmm..
Love the story, Can't say that enough times. But..
There's another story I've read, A Matter of Trust. That story was awsome, sadly never finished.
This one is on par with that one, It's just as good. I just hope it wont suffer the same fate, I hope to be able to see an ending.
Ofcourse, don't get me wrong, I love the story and can't wait for more chapters, Just hoping your story wont end all of the sudden.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I've already finished the story. I'm just taking my time posting up the remaining chapters. :)
Hmm, Shadow's really does have a pretty sharp sixth sense, doesn't he? I can't wait to see how they're going to get out of this mess. ^^
By the way, I couldn't help but wonder what Shadow was dreaming (more like having a nightmare) of a couple of chapters back. Was it another dream of his duties as a guardian, or something concerning Sonic? ...Or both? Just an odd thought that's been floating around in my head lately...
Awww, Shadow would be the jealous type; and Amy of course would be annoying. It's adorable how Shadow tries to cover up his concern, but I imagine Sonic has been alone with him enough to know he is worried.
The story is freakin' awesome so far, Sonic playing the, 'so-called villain'. I'm wondering how the two hedgehogs are going to patch it up. I have to say, I do have a weakness for Sonic being uke, so this story is nicely providing that. :P And gasp, sudden illness?! Looks like morning sickness, but hey, who knows. Another cool twist for the story to take. I really can't wait to read the next chapter, I always look forward to reading them.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Gah, I'm sorry for not reviewing the past couple chapters like I usually do. I got myself a 360 and... yeah. That explains itself. xD
Annnyway, the part where Sonic was teasing Shadow and his reply "Fuck you" made me laugh. I could see the two doing something like that. And regarding Sonic's sickness... It's looking suspeciously (fff that isn't the correct spelling, my phone isn't pickin up on it) like morning sickness. Or I could be way off. :B
Pahaha, my reviews must be horrible since they never have any improvement suggestions. You guys need to stop making it so perfect so there is a point in my reviews rather than full of predictions and favorite parts. :c
Author's Response: xD That's okay! It's nice to see people are still reading and interested in the story. :)
Oh, boy. I knew Amy would enter the story sooner or later. If Shadow punched Rouge in the face for kissing Sonic, I can only imagine what he's going to do to Amy, with her obsessive infatuation for Sonic and all...
Heh, well, I guess that IS a little over the top, but hey, that'd be a pretty interesting twist, wouldn't it? Or maybe I've read too many MPREG stories. ^^; I mean, for all I know, Sonic could just be running to the bathroom because he has to go number two really, really badly. XD
You never cease to surprise me... I could be wrong, and I could be jumping to conclusions far too soon, but... Sonic is PREGNANT, isn't he?! Either that, or this is some crazy April Fools joke. Ooh, but damn it if it ain't really exciting! @w@
I loved reading this chapter, mostly because of Sonic and Shadow's conversation, and then, of course, the big cliffhanger at the end. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter! ^.^
Author's Response: Lol! Pregnant? Wow. Hmm.
Ooh, nice. Another battle for dominance, eh? I wonder who will win this time around... ^.~ Awesome work; keep going! :)
Great Chapter as always. o.o
And i love how Shadow is finally starting to open up to Sonic~
Speaking of that silly little hedgehog. He should've just said it. But i'm sure it'll slip out very soon. ^^
The chapter title scares me alot though ._.
"Sacrifice" I don't want any of those hedgie's to have to be sacrificed, Thats the idea I'm getting >.<
Anyways. Keep up the good work.
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Very nice! Again you're excellent with the details.
The Hidden Palace should be used more often in stories, not necessary to make Sonic transform into Hyper Sonic (not a spoiler anymore since the game is rather old, right?) but in the same kind of way you use it.
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