Haha, when I first read the title Horny Horny Hedgehogs, I immediately thought about the game Hungry Hungry Hippos. xD
Though nothing in this chapter really stuck out for me, 'cept the end. I'm glad to see their relationship slowly deepening. x3 But it was still a great chapter.
You seem to be provoking your RP community a lot. xD I would join, but I am not familiar with the Archie universe at all. And I'm shy. >3>;
Author's Response: xD I'm sure my friend meant for it to sound like Hungry Hungry Hippos. As for the RP group, I do like to advertise. :P We have a lot of good writers on our team but I'd like to expand for more (and that's hard to find in the Sonic fandom <.<). xD If you were really interested in joinin' though, I could help explain what's going on Archie-wise. No need to be shy. :P
Squee! Sonic ALMOST said it!!! X3 Ooh, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Love it! And nice way to end the chapter. The scenery was a nice contrast to that active volcano you mentioned. And it just makes me wanting to READ MORE! Uhm, sorry... but I can't wait for the next chapter. :P
Author's Response: =3 I'm glad you want to read more. Please do! And I look forward to more reviews from ya. :P
:D
I'm actually getting off my lazy ass and reviewing! 8D ...Yeah.
Anyway, the scenery description in particular was just brilliant in this chapter. Really stuck out the most to me. The ending was quite nice as well, showing a 'human' side in Shadow; his limits physically and mentally. x3
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! It lets me know you guys are still interested and I accept critique just as well. xD I'm glad you're enjoying the show. ^_^
That was one, long fight scene! Awesomely detailed. And I hope Sonic snaps out of it. Killing Shadow wouldn't be the most satisfying ending... Any who, please continue!
P.S. Err... I didn't intentionally make that last part rhyme... ^^;
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I appreciate your review. It's okay that you rhymed. xD
That was one, long fight scene! Awesomely detailed. And I hope Sonic snaps out of it. Killing Shadow wouldn't be the most satisfying ending... Any who, please continue!
P.S. Err... I didn't intentionally make that last part rhyme... ^^;
Jeez, you sure know how to keep people's atention. I've been reading a lot of stories at this site.
But this is by far, one of the best. If not the best. I truely mean that.
Keep up the good work & I hope to see another chapter soon.
*And still hope everything will turn out okay between those two*
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :) I hope everything turns out well for them too. xD
Again, nicely detailed! I personally expected Sonic to come back to his senses sooner, but you made me long for more! :P Keep it up!
Oh god! Sonic's enraged now! Good job!
You're very descriptive, always making me wonder what's going to be happening next. I'm imagining all sorts of possibilities, like GUN managing to capture Sonic in a lucky strike and locking him away, with Shadow having to reque him... But I'll just wait to see that you make from it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you're enjoying the story. :) And yes, stay tuned to find out what happens next...! It's sure to be exciting.
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