awesome story keep at it
Author's Response: :) Thanks.
I would just like to say that the fight scene was excellent and very well-written. It was so clear in my head, the visualizations were incredibly animated because of the descriptive details. Give yourselves a pat on the back. xD
I didn't quite catch what got Shadow back to normal, though. But I did get that he was fighting his conscious in a debate to either help Sonic or go get the Master Emerald. xD
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! As for when Shadow became normal, it happened around this point "and the energy it gave out to manipulate the persons within its surroundings started to diminish." After that, it goes on to Shadow, "And he slowed, gradually coming to a halt, shock setting into his features. "What.."" That's when he snapped out of it. :P
Ohh. So he remembers what Sonic means to him, but is under the control of malicious intent. Remnds me of this one picture of Shadow all Black Arm-y and attacking Silver. xD
And speaking of which, will there be any Black Arms references or such?
Author's Response: =D You must read to find out.
Okay okay, I'm a little confused. I was assuming Shads attacked Sonic because of Robotnik's doing, but there were hints that said he was aware of what he was doing. Like the last line, it threw me off. Mind filling me in? xD;
Author's Response: It's like his mind wasn't erased of memories but his will is being influenced by Robotnik. "he couldn't help but think, that is, if it was even really his thought process at work." He doesn't have a conscience or any feelings towards Sonic. He's just acting out on evil intent, basically, from the doctor's doing. :O Did I explain that okay? xD
You two, my friends, have a full-blown talent on your hands. Keep it up, don't stop, and you'll be making a first on here as the first true Sonadow epic on here.
Author's Response: :) Thank you very much! We appreciate the interest in our story and hope to give you guys even more to look forward to.
Heh heh, way to start it off with Shadow finding out that the Master Emerald's been stolen. XD And I just can't get enough of Sonic's flirting with Shadow! It's hilarious. ^^ I'd really love to see what our two little hedgehogs get caught up in--hopefully (but not limited to) in each other. Please update as soon as you can! :D
Author's Response: :) Thanks for your review. Sonic sure can be overbearing sometimes but ya know Shadow secretly loves it. ;P
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