Awwww, that's really sad what happened to Shadow at the end. I hope he shows his feelings for Sonic soon!
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG THIS IS SO SUSPENSEFUL!!!!!!!!!!
This is really cool. I've noticed a few spelling errors but there is nothing else wrong! it's a great story and these military guys or whatever are very mysterious.
XD That ending was hilarious!!! The story is coming good so far you are doing great I'm going onto the next chapter now...
nice. I just don't like how the paragraphs are so long. But other than that, everything is great!
I must say that so far i am enjoying every chapter of this story... I am amazed with your placement of G.U.N. within this story....
Author's Response: Hmm, while GUN being the villain is a bit of a used concept, it's still a decent one - They always did have an evil vibe. Thanks for the review!
You continue to do a great job here, and thus earned another Featured Read.
Looking forward to the big match-up!
Nice details in this chapter. My only complaint is that the chapter was a little bit too short.
You got me wondering what'll happen next!
Author's Response: Yes, I was originally going to put the battle in this chapter as well, but I thought that it was a good way to end it, the way it was. Thanks for the review!
I must say I like the story so far. Keep at it....
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