Awesome, as per usual. I like the science in this one - it sounds like you know exactly what you're talking about, but it is also simplified enough to not sound completely unreadable. Update, please!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was a little worried about putting that scienec thing in, I wasn't sure whether people'd understand it or not. But now I know ^_^

Omg omg I'm on the edge of mah bed plz continue!

Author's Response: Thanks.

I really Didn't expect this story to be that good because of the size But this is a really good story. 4 Stars plus one for avoiding a Rape/Sex Scene where as most writers on here would have had them humping each other in no time flat. So thats five stars Great story no spelling mistakes (As far as i know) and well written Can't wait for the Next chapter

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No reviews? Really? Well, this is a genius story. Your capabilities of displaying emotion are right on target. What I enjoy in this particular chapter is the debate Shadow has with himself. In the end it's not out of morals in particular that he chooses what he does, but because he wants that type of moment with Sonic to be on an emotional level as well. What you show is that Shadow wants a real relationship and you don't make it sound as though he's a whiny schoolgirl or anything. He acts normal, and muses about it on the inside, being the contained individual that he is. Other aspects are that of Sonic: Is he in love with Amy when he's sober and Shadow as a drunk? Or is he subconsciously in love with the black hedgehog? I wonder. That's a good issue for the reader to chew on.

My favorite thing is the little details: Tails saying, "Don't touch any of my stuff!" Typical of a child his age to say. That little dialogue was one of my favorite parts, curious enough. So, overall the story was very well done. One or two typos, nothing big. I hope you continue, because this is golden. ^^