Whoa! One of the BEST sonadow scenes I've ever read!!!
Uhm...May I ask why Sonic would say 'yay...' that there's gonna be sonadow in the next few chapters? Does he support sonadow? Keep the great work. HAHAHAHA!!! KILL 'EM ALL!!! 10/10
*Whimpers* So...Sonic didn't remeber what Shadow said...At all? I feel so bad for him...And now, I finally realized what you meant by saying that in this chapter Shadow finally confesses his love for Sonic...Or did he? Please continue writing, this is awesome even if you didn't concentrate on it. (I don't concentrate when I'm writing...Sometimes I would listen to very distracting music while writing...) 10/10
Uhm...Is Sonic gonna drink that water...?
this story somewhat made no sence at all...I'm confused how did eggman get control of the city if he stopped all his crazy sceming?
what was under tails' desk?
This really makes me sad how this story has not got any reviews in a long time. This story is really good, and deserves it. I hope you continue it eventually, the plot is great in this.
Author's Response: Eh, I've once again fallen into the stupid pitfall of not being motivated. I really, really do want to update my stories, but I just can't be bothered to start up Word and write. I'm kinda concerned that I'll fuck it up, considering the high expectations people seem to have, and I just want to keep my fics good. Thanks.
This is very well written so far. I really like it- it's very emotional but also has action in it too so it doesn't get too sappy. Very nice job!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks =3
So... Eggman has actually taken over Westopolis? I bet he did that while Sonic was freaking out about Amy, GUN was trying to kill Sonic and Shadow, and Shadow was doing what he does best. That is to say, killing people.
Great chapter, though not one of your best. Can't wait to see what my suggestion turns into, Illumini.
Sentzu, Being of Darkness and Light.
Author's Response: Heh heh, close but no cigar... All will be revealed in good time. Eh, I struggled a bit with this chapter, mainly trying to get back into writing stuff... And don't worry, your idea won't be forgotten. Thanks!
This is pretty good, I like it, if you keep making chapters like this, I will contemplate making a story dedicated to you. ^_^
Author's Response: Ooh, really? That'd be cool... Thanks for reviewing.
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