Ok my only cons are what Illumini siad and one more thing, Shadow's reaction is pretty unrealistic, I'm not talking about his franchised personality (in the games and shows) but if anyone I knew was kidnapped, molested (despite them liking it) and then all of a sudden had their handcuffs or whatever was used removed and the guy just stood there, they'd beat the living... I don't use profanity often, but you should get my point. I hate to say that I'm probably not going to read any more of this.

Author's Response: You know I wrote this last year so I know that, do you even know how you feel getting raped? I read some of the stories here that had rape in it, it's so unrealistic since I have freaking tried it... I hate the person still for doing it too me, and here Sonic or Shadow rape each other and they love each other still then, THAT is unrealistic, since shadow got released again in my story, but I still know it's not realistic at all, BUT it's only a fanfiction, I won't write something like this again since I am making another at the moment that is more realistic. At least I am making better stories at the moment since I get the point that yo talked about. Though I would hope that you would read the other when it comes out since they won't like each other just like that in this, but I made it for a contest the last year, and it IS hard to make it a sonadow story when you made ONLY have ONE chapter. ^^; I don't wanna be angry so I am just telling you this. Not to be mad at you or anything, but I have a lot of problems just to WORK on things since that is what happened to me afterward, I trailed off things, I couldn't work serious, and not even make stories...

Eh, it's alright, I guess. I just found a few bits that seemed odd. For example, WHY did Sonic feel the need to tie Shadow up and lock him in the cupboard? Why did Shadow ask Sonic if he was gay, right out of the blue? That said, the story was alright, there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, nothing big. I'd be interested to see what else you can do.

Author's Response: Omg thank you, I dunno why he asked it I just didn't know how else to make it up to be sonadow if Shadow just walked to Silver instead, then it would be shadilver but this site is for sonadow, and with the Shadow part where he gets tied up, that was because I wanted Sonic to be a naughty boy, that was why he gave him that beer. I have sometimes problems to find my mistakes, so sometimes I need to read it more than one time, that's why it took me so long to write it, and make it long at the same time.