You know I can almost see that warped sense of terrifying logic. Great job. XD Sonic's a serious ball player.
Author's Response: He most certainly is. Shadow doesn't fully get it quite yet.
I feel like no words can describe what's going on in my head.
Bad. Ass.
That seems to sum it up well.
Author's Response: Thankies...been so long. *smacks self*
Aww man, guess I wait
Awsome! Can't wait for more
Author's Response: This one is pretty much on hold. My other story is my main concern right now. Thanks though! XD
i like it. reallt good. do you think that you could write more of it, perhaps? ^^
Author's Response: I'm getting there. The next chapter has been hard to write, but I'm getting there. Slowly. Don't worry, this story won't be abandoned like so many others on this site. *wipes away a tear* Thanks for the comment and the rating!
An incredible story so far, I really hope you continue with it!
You certainly deserve to win that challenge, good luck!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will endeavour to do so!
Cool. I really hope Shadow kicks Sonic's ass in this race. Hehe though I found cute and funny that Sonic had named the island like him.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad! Thanks for the review!
As soon as I saw the title, I knew that this would have something to do with Sonic and his obsessive...obsession. A very interesting chapter, and the comparison with the Sonic/Amy relationship to the relationship in this makes the reader see the two in a completely different way. I tip my hat to you for that idea.
In the eleventh paragraph, Sonic says "IgavemtotheBlakAms, which a lack of end quotations. Perhaps you meant "Igave'mtotheBlackArms." or "IgavethemtotheBlackArms." In the eleventh chapter from the end, you said "alter" instead of "later." Another suggestion would be that after Shadow's thought, you went to Sonic. This may confuse some because they think that Shadow is still think it. Perhaps draw the reader's attention back to Sonic though an action or whatnot?
All in all, a genius chapter. I love your characterization and this story seems to get better and better. I wonder how this race is going to turn out. (And who needs disclaimers? XP)
Author's Response: Thank-you! :D Sonic babble of 'IgavemtotheBlakAms,' was intentional, although the lack of end punctuation wasn't, and I'll fix that. That was to show he was spitting it out as fast as he could so Shadow didn't hear all too well. Thanks for the review, one of the highlights of every submission. Thankyou! ^^
Hee, I like the uniqueness of this story. The way you portray Sonic's obsession and intwine it with his personality fit together nicely. Though, I think it's sort of OOC that Shadow is dealing with Sonic this much, but that would ruin the fun of the story. x3
Author's Response: Well, Shadow has a plan. :D Thanks for the review!
Shadow said sorry. Half the world shall explode as dachshunds become our new leaders. All jokes aside, brilliant characterization as usual. His hesitation tells the reader that he's not exactly used to saying such a phrase. And the way that Sonic hangs onto every little mumble Shadow makes an example of the idol-like love he has for the other. The way he lashes out with words against Shadow's berating going too far is genius.
(Two spelling errors: apologise-apologize, which was in the third paragraph, and pretences-pretenses, which occurred in the sixth paragraph.) No serious errors at all were in this chapter and some great character development occurred. You leave me eager to know how these two are going to live on an island together. Even though Sonic loves Shadow, the two are still very much like two scorpions in a bottle. Great chapter, as always. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for all your intelligent and researched reviews. They make me very happy. ^^ This was originally going to be a two-shot but I can't stop now.
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