X0 You can't just leave me hanging! : D I feel as though I have just had sex. Is that weird? Just a little? Ok... ~Miles Prower~
I didn't want to read this, because I knew at the end I'd be disappointed to the fact that I have to wait again for the next installment...
But the wait is most definitely worth it... Osnap. -Points to Silver.- What is he doing there? DK Gross bastard just watched them have sex!
I know that if I were you, I wouldn't care about my opinion, but in my opinion, Shadow and Sonic moved kind of fast.
I guess I'm not used to the whole, "This has to be 9 chapters, otherwise it's too long" trend that dashes about the Fanfiction... but
Shadow seemed to move kind of fast, for not wanting to move fast, and Sonic kind of wanted it more than I had expected from someone
beaten and raped all their life. I know you have some sort of super epic awesome reasoning behind this, but don't give anything away. XD
Please don't hate me for bashing your story. I'm really sorry. It's just, I realized that constructive criticism is helpful.
I hope I gave you constructive criticism! ^,^ Really sorry, again. <3 (Sorry if this is confusing.)
As always, take your time and make it the best. I know you already do that, and it isn't much of a matter, but just in case...
This is the part where I say, "Thank you!" and run away crying because I cannot write anything this good, or organized... ^^ Good Luck! <33
(Going to D.C. for the week. Hoping to see a new section up when I get back!)

 

I meant to post this up a few days ago, but I just figured out that the cottage has Wi-Fi. X0 I sounded like such a dick a few days ago!

Author's Response: Alright, alright, you've got a fair point on the whole 'moving too fast' thing. I guess I did leave out a bit of their relationship development... But hey, whaddya gonna do? As always, thanks for reviewing... And yes, it is a little weird that you feel as though you just did it... Though then again, just shows how good my lemon must have been!

Aww you always impress ME Illumini. Heh heh.

Aww Shadow's so sweet! This is my favorite story by you.

Author's Response: Aww... Thanks, Lightning... And I'll probably be on MSN a lot more often now, don't worry...

LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: You know who REALLY likes to hear about lemons? MASilvers.

Very ncie, veyr well written, very nice! Hot springs...mm, romanticness! Love it, love it, good, keep it coming! Not just lemons, but good writing and chapters!

Author's Response: Aw... Thanks. Speaking about doing more lemons, you should go have a chat to MASilvers about it. He'd just love to discuss them.

Hmmm interesting... if you get writers block I'll be ready to help... in more ways than one heh heh... Did that even make sense?

Author's Response: 'Course it did... I'm ALWAYS up for a little help... ;)