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Reviews For Dark Salvation

Name: blacklily (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 6:39 PM · For: Tails-Or
such a great chapter!!! I like the way this is going, you're just great! I never thought i'd read such a good slavery fic since terras wrath dissapeared T.T

Edit from Shadow: Yea, Terra's Wrath just decided to pretty much ditch us without so much as a warning, which pissed me off.

Author's Response: Ah! GET OUT OF MY RESPONSES! RAWR! Anyway, thanks, I never did get to read that fic... Annoys me a little.


Name: LaurySeas (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:24 PM · For: Dreams of Darkness
(Deepsigh) Oh thank god,...I actually thought and say "Ohno!" Love how this is going and Great Job!

Author's Response: Hee... I was aiming for that type of reaction! Thanks for the review!


Name: toby4ever (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 6:42 PM · For: Bought

how do you read this?(im new to this that's why)



Author's Response: Delete system32 and become an hero. To actually read the story, click the title. Make sure your browser allows dialog boxes. Failing that, hit Table of Contents. Click continue. Bam.


Name: Dragonscale (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 3:29 AM · For: Dreams of Darkness
Awesome! Shows how this life of slavery has cut into Sonic. And as for the money idea I gave you...go ahead and use it. I still think Silver should reverse roles with Shadow out of spite and lust; make Shadow his slave and Sonic unable to stop it, at least initially. I'm glad you liked my idea, though!

Author's Response: I... Have no idea how that would work. The concept for what your suggesting is good, but it basically requires Shadow to willingly do so, which makes no sense. I might still use the money idea, though. Thanks for the review!


Name: Shadow (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 6:41 AM · For: Bought
I agree with CI on this, I like the different direction you've taken on this fic. Its a breath of fresh air to be honest.


Name: Chemical Irony (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 5:20 AM · For: Dreams of Darkness
Speaking of strawberry jam, do I smell filler chapter? ::Cracks whip.:: Get back to the story! Fluff is nice, fluff is good. But not as delicious as something of substance. Jelly filling just doesn't give you quite the same result as-- um, what was I talking about? Food or plot?

Anyway, yeah. Looking forward to the next update. I like that you took this in a different direction so far from the traditional slave fics. :> And of course, it's well-written.

::Noms on filling.. er, filler. I mean, character development.::

Author's Response: I prefer to think of it as wordcount-buffing ^_^ And yes, I'll continue with the main plot in the next chapter. Thanks!


Name: Ashura 09 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 8:45 PM · For: Dreams of Darkness
pretty good so far ^^ please update again soon :3

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: MASilvers (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 8:26 PM · For: Dreams of Darkness
Wow... Just.... Wow...

Author's Response: ^_^


Name: blacklily (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 6:17 PM · For: Dreams of Darkness
How cute!!! I love this story!! I've never thought Shadow could be so gentle, and Sonic so cute!! You're just amazing!!

Author's Response: Hee, thanks.


Name: MASilvers (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:19 AM · For: Bought
I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I have been working on Shadows and dust lately.
I must say though I was right to take a break and read this instead.
The way you develop the characters in this story in such an OOC setting is devastating. I didn't think you could turn Silver into the jealous type. look like I was wrong. Keep this up! I'm just itching for more.

Author's Response: I can't tell whether you mean devestating in a good or bad way... I think it's a good way. Thanks!


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