Oh Gawd!haha! Silver is such a snobb its too cute!
Sonic act simply adorable and Shadow me like!
Author's Response: Thanks!
I apologsie profusely for not reviewing sooner. May I jsut say that this story is inspirational, and I love it. Sonic being broken is a very hard idea to pull off, but you've done it excellently. Silver appears to have the hots for Shadow...or is he after Shaodw's money? ? So many questions. Cna't wait for an update. Is it just me or is the butler usually a villain in most stories? ^^
Author's Response: Hmm, after Shadow's money? That's a good idea. I may have to steal it. And yes, the 'Evil Butler' is pretty cliche, but I didn't realise it at the time ^_^. Thanks for the review!
Really nice! It's strange how you can keep Sonic, in this role, in-character that well!
Keep it going!
Author's Response: Yeah, having Sonic as slave and having him with his normal personality really is a bit like trying to fit a square peg in a round hole, hmm? Thanks for the review!
-whistles- Wow, that was a powerful, incredible chapter right there. I enjoyed that a LOT. Keep at it!
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^
Aw cute little Sonic sleeps in a carrige. Silver's not being a very good butler though now is he?
Author's Response: No, he isn't >_> Thanks for the review!
OHAI. Thought I'd tell ya that you have a GREAT start here and thanks to the new RATING SYSTEM I have in place, I give it a 10 =) Congrats on being the FIRST FANFIC to be rated!
Author's Response: Oh crap! More Pressure! I can't breathe... Heh, thanks for the review... And the rating!
That's actually a great start. Reminds me of some of my old RPs.
Hm. This reminds me of a cross between The Lost Heart and He is my Master. But it still is very original. I love it!
Author's Response: Hmm, now that you mention it, it is like a crossover of those two. And thanks for the review!
Very good I can't wait to see more. XD
Author's Response: Thnx!
First off, genius intro. Second, I love the narrative voice. Sonic being broken is a new concept to me. He seems so strong-willed. If you pull this off (and I believe you shall) this shall be a fantastic story to put under this genre of sonadow. Shadow being kind is also something hard for me to fathom, but I do not doubt your abilities. The story is well done, so far. Are there any colors for that can opener?
Author's Response: Any colour you like... So long as it's black. And thanks for the critiques. The characters will be a bit OOC in this story - Quite a bit, in fact - But hey, that's the fun of fanfiction. Thanks for the review!
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