I love it. Your story it's amazing!!!!
Awesome Story, I think you have gifted writing skills because I mean come on this could be a book.
OH COME ON!!! THATS THE END!!! Plz add more!!! dont leave us hanging!!!
great story, love the times cream akes them about thier love life, and MAKE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS!!!!
...God damn you. God damn you to the greatest depths of hell. This had better have an epilogue. That ending is just to great of a cliffhanger, Master Lemon. Which means either you are planning a sequel(which I doubt, privately), or you have an epilogue planned. The later is my guess. Now, if we had seen Shadow actually die, and you pulled to a third party perspective, that would be alright. But you didn't. You left us with no idea what happened to Shdow, whether or not he actually managed to resurrect Sonic with his own lifeforce, or whether they both lived. Not to mention an explaination on how Amy and Tails, amoung others, are still alive, when we very clearly saw them die. And not even the stubborn stupidity of Knuckles would have allowed him to survive that explosion! Unless... unless this was all a dream he had in a coma, to explain why Sonic was dead. Which you still have to explain! God damn you, this story isn't done, not by a long shot, and IT NEEDS TO BE FINISHED, MASTER LEMON! IT IS VERY CLEARLY NOT COMPLETE! Finish it!
Sen'Tzu, Being of Darkness and Light.
Author's Response: Well, read it over again. This time read between the lines. It's all there, such as the point where he saw Amy die in the car. That immediately should have given it away about what was going to "possibly" happen.Although... am I truly done with this yet? Could there be more than... oh... let's say... an epilogue? Could I have already had something in the works? Who knows, but only two hedgehog's on here. ^_^
As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
It's done....?
Hmmm...well then if it is then this is my last review.
And if it not completely done...oh well...
Ahem....
This story truly was a story that beg at you to keep reading it.
Well plotted with twists in the story and scenes that shows how deep the love Sonic and Shadow had for each other.
Words are carefully chosen to make the story real(in my view of seeing it).
The fighting scenes and the violence was perfect.
Over all this story was enjoyable to read and I hope to see more of your stories in the future.
My over all rank of the story;10/10.
Author's Response: Well, I am glad you enjoyed it, and am currently thinking about another. However, trying to juggle two stories, my life, and the navy... it's hard stuff.As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
I would love to beta for your next story. After all, it shall be the famed Master Lemon I a beta reading for, no? Besides, I get a preview of everything, which is always nice, especially for a writer as good as you. Until you post again,
Sen'tzu, Being of Darkness and Light
Author's Response: Well, I am not one for beta readers anymore, however the idea would help... I shall think about it. For now though I need to get this story finished and over with, but not in a rush as that creates crappy endings.When, AND IF, I come up with a new story... I will most likely send the idea your way.
As Always, Much Appreciated. ^_^
Finally you updated!!!
But now you torture us with a cliffhanger dammit!!!
But yet it is another well done chapter with scenes that are clear as day to imagine.
I still wonder who the enemy is....
Hopefully you please update soon.
Awesome chapter!!!^-^
Author's Response: The Navy has me working almost 18 hour work days.... I haven't been able to get a chance to go back to the office to Sonic in the last 2 weeks.I shall update as soon as I can, but the way things are right now... I have no idea when that will be >.<
As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
did he die?
did he die?
Author's Response: That would depend on who you are talking about. The chapter I see you commented on, it would have to be either Shadow or Sonic. However, if you are commenting about the last chapter in this story.... than I would have to say you were talking about Tails. I know it's said and all, but hey... when in war... bad things happen. As Always, Much Appreciated ^^
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