So, this is the Master Lemon I have heard so much about. You have an interesting writing style, but constantly get your they're's and yours wrong. Your- possessive(first person). You're-contraction for You are. There- showing or designating a place. Their-Plural possessive(third person). They're-Contraction for They Are. Common mistakes to make, and simple to correct. If you would like, I would be happy to beta for you.
Truly, an interesting story, and I wish to see more.
Sentzu, Being of Darkness and Light.
Author's Response: Well, I am working on it... even though I could do a little better to catch those mistakes. D:As for the beta... eh... well... I haven't really thought about a beta reader since the start of this when on one wanted to do it. Since I am almost done with this story (Literally), and plan on just finishing out Genesis (As two stories, and a headache later I still cannot think straight, mainly for which I blame the Rum >.<).
If you would like to beta my next story once I get Genesis and this one finished out than let me know. XD
As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
You killed Miles!?
What's wrong with you, wake up on the wrong side of the iced tea?
Author's Response: Did you read the prologue to the story? It kinda outlined alot of stuff.That's ok though, trust me... you haven't seen the best part yet.
Hell yeah! I want blood... right now! Good addition to your story Lemon. I was beginning to wonder whether or not you were still continuing these.
Nicely done ^^
Author's Response: Wow... I don't even put this up for like half an hour and you've already commented? What... do you have some sort of mind reading power that I don't know of? Heh, anyway, I am glad that you liked it, I just hope that the ending will come out as well as I want it to.As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
Hehe... when you told me that you finished your lemon, I thought you were lying to me. I guess I was wrong, heh. I can't believe that you had cream walk in when I was having special moments with Shadow.
Well done Lemon!
Author's Response: I knew you would talk to be about the Cream part. I thought it was hilarious to say the least. Did you have fun though? I mean that must've been some fun times.As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
-SNERK- OMG The last part was hilarious XDXDXD. Great job Lemon =3
Author's Response: Well... I had to throw something in there. I mean I depicted Cream as wanting to see them go at it. What better than to have her walk in when Shadow is sucking Sonic off right at the last second.As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
Ahh, nothin' like some refreshing lemonade.
Author's Response: Heh... nicely played with the joke there. You and Illumini should make a comedy out of that. However, I figured that I should have done something extra special since I had been away for so long.As Always, Much appreciated ^_^
Well, cranking out another great chapter, right Silvers (ive decided it was enough torture from me, since if i got to into teasing, it would be almost like being literally whipped)
Author's Response: Well, I 'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Soon, very soon indeed, The story will be complete.Or will it?
As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^
YOU KILLED OFF CHRIS!!! YAY!! Though I am still said that you killed off, Amy, even if it is in your prologue.
I am also happy that you killed of Espio! Traitorous bastard!
Nicely done Lemon. Nicely done indeed... XD
Author's Response: Yes, I killed off the one character that I seriously hate.... Chris. I know you guys think I'm some sort of jackass by killing off Amy (Even though it was in my prologue)As always... Much Appreciated ^_^
(Oh and stop calling me Lemon!)
Ouch...wow...
Author's Response: Well, I'm guessing that you liked the new chapter. Just wait though... my ideas for this story are just now coming in to play.As always... Much Appreciated ^_^
Amy and Knuckles, holy crap. O_o... Wow, great writing. Action-packed and very well-written. I like your description of the dark office. Oh, and Espio. Same. *evil laughter*
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you liked it. It was not easy coming up with this chapter... I will state that from the very start. I'm just happy that I kept up to my word and killed off Chris in two chapters, heh.As always... Much Appreciated ^_^
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